The chick looks like she was cut out of cardboard.
The text logo looks like you shut your eyes and played with Photoshop's text warping features.
You forgot a "?" on the "What more could you ask for" line.
Not enough sales text. Not enough content. Not enough...anything. Keep working on it man and bring it back. Also, if you spent more than 34.5 seconds creating that, hire someone.
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