|
I've decided to provide feedback for designs submitted, here in the thread, instead of via icq or email so that all designers can benefit from the information.
If you aren't comfortable having your work publicly critiqued, just let me know and I'll gladly respect that. Also, you certainly aren't required to follow my suggestions, but its probably a good idea.
AdultRMX- Very good submission, thanks for your efforts!
'Get to know me' icons- Quite nice. I'm not especially crazy about the chat icon. That little 'person' animation has a very asexual feel- got anything sexier for that button? This is the most important button, because it'll link to our chat area, which is how we'll sell private and group shows. Also, I like the 'my pictures' icon a lot, but in looking closely, the person in the photograph looks like it could be a child- and that's a big no-no.
'My Availability' icons- If possible, the icon should represent the type of show offered. Using the same image for all 3 options probably won't work so well. Also, these look somewhat like buttons.. Remember the icons in this section will not be functional buttons, they are only indications to tell the user what type of performance the model is available for. Finally, although I like your decision to integrate the site color in the 'Get to know me' buttons, I don't think these colors work as well, in this section.
I hope you'll continue to develop this submission... but either way, THANKS!
Pinkish1- Very stylish submission, bravo!
'Get to know me' icons- Have a good style. Possible to 'crank up' the 'chat' icon? This is how most of our revenues will be generated.
'My Availability' icons- The 'Group performance' icon is a little misleading. This doesn't mean that the user will see/chat with a group of performers. Rather, it means a group of users will see/chat with the single performer.
Good work, would enjoy seeing the next step. Thanks a bunch!
|