What do you think of this mainstream splash page?

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  • Dynamix
    G F Y not
    • Jan 2004
    • 2910

    #1

    What do you think of this mainstream splash page?

    Going for simplicity here.. it's for a site for a musician (rapper).



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  • Yug
    Confirmed User
    • Dec 2002
    • 218

    #2
    The question is not if we like it ... the question isnt even if YOU like it ... the question is does the rapper or people you are making this for like it

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    • Dynamix
      G F Y not
      • Jan 2004
      • 2910

      #3
      Originally posted by Yug
      The question is not if we like it ... the question isnt even if YOU like it ... the question is does the rapper or people you are making this for like it

      Neither he nor the person I'm doing business with are online, so I'm kind of at a setback.. trying to get this wrapped up tonight.

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      • Rob
        I'm a great bowler.
        • Nov 2003
        • 13310

        #4
        It looks like he's shitting out the enter button.

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        • Spudman
          Confirmed User
          • Aug 2002
          • 3198

          #5
          its a bit to simple for my liking. maybe you should make it abit easier for the surfer to veiw ? make it a bit easier to see.

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          • Dynamix
            G F Y not
            • Jan 2004
            • 2910

            #6
            Originally posted by HighOnAcid
            It looks like he's shitting out the enter button.
            LOL noted. I'm just gonna take off the button methinks.

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            • alias
              aliasx
              • Apr 2001
              • 19010

              #7
              It could be better, just skip the splash anyway.. .
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              • Dynamix
                G F Y not
                • Jan 2004
                • 2910

                #8
                Originally posted by alias
                It could be better, just skip the splash anyway.. .
                I hate splash pages.. reduce bookmarks, take up server space, and most of all piss people off. But they asked for both a splash design and design for the main interface

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                • slavdogg
                  Confirmed User
                  • Jan 2001
                  • 3570

                  #9
                  it needs MORE red
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                  • MikeVega
                    **Porntrepreneur**
                    • Jul 2004
                    • 12788

                    #10
                    I'm not a designer but it looks a bit light ...i'd make it just a bit easer to see...


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                    • Dynamix
                      G F Y not
                      • Jan 2004
                      • 2910

                      #11
                      Originally posted by slavdogg
                      it needs MORE red


                      I was going for big contrast. Vast amounts of red with black/white focal points attract the eye to the image of the rapper.

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                      • Dynamix
                        G F Y not
                        • Jan 2004
                        • 2910

                        #12
                        Originally posted by mvega325
                        I'm not a designer but it looks a bit light ...i'd make it just a bit easer to see...
                        how's this...

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                        • alias
                          aliasx
                          • Apr 2001
                          • 19010

                          #13
                          Put some kind of fade [black bottom to current color top] into the lettering and then darken him up a bit.. .

                          Nothing wrong with having the dude be off center either, I'd move him to the left a little closer to those lines or incorporate the 2.
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                          • Dynamix
                            G F Y not
                            • Jan 2004
                            • 2910

                            #14
                            Originally posted by alias
                            Put some kind of fade [black bottom to current color top] into the lettering and then darken him up a bit.. .

                            Nothing wrong with having the dude be off center either, I'd move him to the left a little closer to those lines or incorporate the 2.
                            Better?


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                            • Rob
                              I'm a great bowler.
                              • Nov 2003
                              • 13310

                              #15
                              The image of the rapper is just plain whack! It looks like there should be something underneath him...it doesn't look like a natural position.

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