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  • Sethseekstruth
    Confirmed User
    • Mar 2004
    • 588

    #1

    Please be brutal and harsh-site check

    Please tell me how to improve this site....if someone leaves a detailed useful critique and recommends a good sponsor, i will click you refferal link


    http://usedwives.avstour.com/
    https://www.niteflirt.com/pid/12631704
  • PenetratinP
    Confirmed User
    • Aug 2002
    • 2689

    #2
    I hate to say this...but the site is very bad.

    The text at the top is hard on the eyes since it has different colored backgrounds than the rest of the page.

    If you're going to center the top text than center the ads for the cam girls as well. Also don't repeat that ad over and over again.


    Instead of doing this:

    http://photos.yahoo.com/bc/aw1441
    2 photos of 30 y.o asian lady

    Why not just make "2 photos of 30 y.o. asian lady" the actual link to that URL?

    good luck

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    • Sethseekstruth
      Confirmed User
      • Mar 2004
      • 588

      #3
      Seroiously, thanks


      Originally posted by PenetratinP
      I hate to say this...but the site is very bad.

      The text at the top is hard on the eyes since it has different colored backgrounds than the rest of the page.

      If you're going to center the top text than center the ads for the cam girls as well. Also don't repeat that ad over and over again.


      Instead of doing this:

      http://photos.yahoo.com/bc/aw1441
      2 photos of 30 y.o asian lady

      Why not just make "2 photos of 30 y.o. asian lady" the actual link to that URL?

      good luck
      https://www.niteflirt.com/pid/12631704

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      • Sethseekstruth
        Confirmed User
        • Mar 2004
        • 588

        #4
        Hey, I made that first change..any other ideas?
        https://www.niteflirt.com/pid/12631704

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        • Wiggles
          Too lazy to set a custom title
          • May 2004
          • 14423

          #5
          scrap your layout, check out some other adult sites and get someone to build you a nice layout.
          no sig

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          • Sethseekstruth
            Confirmed User
            • Mar 2004
            • 588

            #6
            Can you give me some specific examples?

            What exactly is wrong with it other than i am using the default html editor, which I will be using a shareware soon, but i am making the site self financing.


            Originally posted by Wiggles
            scrap your layout, check out some other adult sites and get someone to build you a nice layout.
            https://www.niteflirt.com/pid/12631704

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