some vid clips of mine (vid)

1.wmv that girls body looks exactly like my ex's
i can't watch that shit anymore

thanx a lot, go fuck yourself

for 2.wmv ... instead of filming her flailing around off-beat like an idiot,
why don't you slap her across the face with a cock and maybe stick down her throat. afterwards you can force that cock into her ass and have a closeup shot of her face as she takes it all in. finish it all off with a messy facial and get her to tell the camera that she loves her job -- that's what people wanna see!

http://www.ezpantyhosefetish.com/1/2.wmv

that one's better. i was referring to http://www.ezpantyhosefetish.com/2.wmv

however /1/2.wmv -- outfit is sexy, girls okay, setting is good

camera work needs a little work -- be careful on the zooming. walk around dont zoom in and out from the same spot. it looks very home-videoish -- it's the kind of quality you would expect from maybe a snuff flick but not for quality porn you'd be able to convert into loot.

same with the lighting (put up some shaders or something or use some kind of filtration with premiere)

the sound isnt there either

you need to cut out all the unwanted sounds here and there 'like when she moves around and you can hear the movements -- it takes away from quality a lot.

get your model drunk or feed her some valiums -- she looks hella nervous -- that's a turn off and makes it look really amateur.

cool