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  • Mutt
    Too lazy to set a custom title
    • Sep 2002
    • 34431

    #1

    Critique Wanted

    take a look at this site, it's not finished but that's the basic layout and style http://www.wantongirls.com/wantondotcom

    giving me a big headache
    I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!
  • TheWildcard
    So Fucking Banned
    • Jun 2004
    • 4759

    #2
    Looks a bit boring to me.

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    • pine
      Confirmed User
      • Oct 2002
      • 1373

      #3
      Not bad. I don't really like the rollovers on the menu buttons all that much. The diagonal scanline BG seems a bit "chunky", like it's more that a single-pixel image.

      On the bright side, I love the nipples on that girl!
      unattended error: ID 10 T. Check connection between keyboard and chair.

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      • Slutworks-Lester
        Registered User
        • Jun 2004
        • 38

        #4
        The design looks good, I am not diggin' the font though.
        The n in wanton (after the a) looks spaced different then the rest of the word.
        Also the wanton photography logo looks to me a little unbalanced.
        It kinda looks odd being at the top and all the blank space in left under it.
        looks good so far!

        I really like the art on the front page:
        http://www.wantongirls.com/

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        • Mutt
          Too lazy to set a custom title
          • Sep 2002
          • 34431

          #5
          diagonal pinstripe is only one pixel so it's gotta be the colors that are making it look 'chunky' to you.

          you're right, the spacing between the 'a' and 'n' is a booboo.

          the space below the word Wanton being empty - only on the first page - i like the sparseness.

          thanks for the critiques - gonna change some things and be done with it. it's a site for models mostly which is why i wanted it to look artsy.
          I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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          • infectd
            Confirmed User
            • Dec 2002
            • 1122

            #6
            who fired your old designer? I like dthe stuff you had up like last yr

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            • V_RocKs
              Damn Right I Kiss Ass!
              • Nov 2003
              • 32451

              #7
              Just make sure Wanton Media and Pancho Dog don't sue you for any similarities...

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              • Paul Markham
                Too old to care
                • Jun 2001
                • 52942

                #8
                Got to admit that with Brians photography you could have done better.

                What are you trying to achieve with the site?



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                • Snake Doctor
                  I'm Lenny2 Bitch
                  • Mar 2001
                  • 13449

                  #9
                  Hey Mutt how do I contact you guys about producing some content for me?
                  sig too big

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                  • Doctor Dre
                    Too lazy to set a custom title
                    • Jan 2001
                    • 51692

                    #10
                    Looks half pro half candy half boring ... dunno honestly I dont appreciate the feeling too much ... but its still better then 90 % of the sites the newbs arround here are posting
                    Originally posted by rayadp05
                    I rebooted, deleted temp files, history, cookies and everything...still cannot view the news clip. All I see is that fucking gay ass music video from "Rick Roll". Anyone else have a different link to the news clip?

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                    • Mutt
                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                      • Sep 2002
                      • 34431

                      #11
                      the only purpose right now is to recruit girls which is why it's designed not to look like a porn site and kind of feminine.

                      i'm gonna do it over again with the devil girl logo more prominent.
                      I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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                      • Mutt
                        Too lazy to set a custom title
                        • Sep 2002
                        • 34431

                        #12
                        Originally posted by Lenny2
                        Hey Mutt how do I contact you guys about producing some content for me?
                        Lenny ICQ me #174-676-830 or email me at [email protected]

                        thanks
                        I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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                        • Vitasoy
                          GFY HALL OF FAME DAMMIT!!!
                          • Oct 2003
                          • 58202

                          #13
                          Originally posted by TheWildcard
                          Looks a bit boring to me.

                          Sometimes, boring is good. It's very user friendly. Nothing to cluttered which is great.


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                          • Paul Markham
                            Too old to care
                            • Jun 2001
                            • 52942

                            #14
                            Originally posted by Mutt
                            the only purpose right now is to recruit girls which is why it's designed not to look like a porn site and kind of feminine.

                            i'm gonna do it over again with the devil girl logo more prominent.
                            Then go for less arty and more "Soft Nude" Calendar shots.

                            The pro's will still answer and the new ones will not come thinking it's all arty.

                            We have this up on the Net, the English version is at the end.
                            It does well, remember they need the money.



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                            • Peter Romero
                              Long time no happy ending
                              • Feb 2003
                              • 10618

                              #15
                              I liked the one with Luna on the front better.


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                              • KRL
                                Entrepreneur
                                • Oct 2002
                                • 31429

                                #16
                                The rollover flash buttons made me dizzy. Everything else was ok.
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                                • V_RocKs
                                  Damn Right I Kiss Ass!
                                  • Nov 2003
                                  • 32451

                                  #17
                                  The buttons are a big noob mistake. That's web design 101.

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                                  • Ash@phpFX
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Nov 2003
                                    • 4292

                                    #18
                                    the first page looks good, the buttons are pretty cheezy though

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                                    • Mutt
                                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                                      • Sep 2002
                                      • 34431

                                      #19
                                      Originally posted by POV Porn guy
                                      I liked the one with Luna on the front better.
                                      can't beat Luna
                                      I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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                                      • Mutt
                                        Too lazy to set a custom title
                                        • Sep 2002
                                        • 34431

                                        #20
                                        Originally posted by charly
                                        Then go for less arty and more "Soft Nude" Calendar shots.

                                        The pro's will still answer and the new ones will not come thinking it's all arty.

                                        We have this up on the Net, the English version is at the end.
                                        It does well, remember they need the money.
                                        yeah, gonna put softcore shots of some average looking girls and some pretty girls - don't want girls to think they have to be Jenna Jameson to get paid to do nude modeling.
                                        I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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                                        • Mike AI
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Jan 2001
                                          • 3624

                                          #21
                                          I like it.... boring can be good for the right sites. Content sites should be focused on the content, not on the design. A clean, easy to use layout is more important.


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                                          • latinasojourn
                                            Confirmed User
                                            • Oct 2003
                                            • 3191

                                            #22
                                            simple clean and elegant.

                                            B&W image juxtaposed to color images is unique touch.

                                            easy navigation scheme.

                                            hard to beat for effectiveness.


                                            usually simpler is better when it comes to making coin on the web.

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                                            • Khun
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Jun 2004
                                              • 1239

                                              #23
                                              I like the simplicity of it. Not a down side for me.
                                              Sig is on vacation... (I wish I could vacation as long as my sig has...)

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                                              • SlickRick
                                                Confirmed User
                                                • Jan 2003
                                                • 2849

                                                #24
                                                I like the site simple looking decent colors, good job.

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                                                • Manowar
                                                  jellyfish  
                                                  • Dec 2003
                                                  • 71528

                                                  #25
                                                  looks very classy, definetly going for the business like approach

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                                                  • Mutt
                                                    Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                    • Sep 2002
                                                    • 34431

                                                    #26
                                                    Originally posted by Mike AI
                                                    I like it.... boring can be good for the right sites. Content sites should be focused on the content, not on the design. A clean, easy to use layout is more important.

                                                    look http://www.camacstudios.com/portfolio.html

                                                    look http://www.wantongirls.com/wantondotcom/portfolio.html

                                                    i'm a thief

                                                    thanks for the feedback, i have to scrap this design.
                                                    I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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                                                    • Nysus
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Aug 2001
                                                      • 7817

                                                      #27
                                                      Mike AI's right. Design doesn't matter except for ease of navigation, clarity, and speed.

                                                      It loads fairly slow for me as well? Anyone else?

                                                      Cheers,
                                                      Matt
                                                      What name is pr0 / Untouched Markets using these days? Untouched Markets - pr0 - Refund My Money Now

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