Check out my first TGP - advice pls

**V_RocKs** · 06-26-2004, 09:59 PM

Needs a better flow... But with some work it seems it has a chance too. Reword or retool some things, like the
16 blah links
16 blah links...

**rezdesign** · 06-26-2004, 10:05 PM

thanks, i was also thinking the same thing. there isn't enough room there for a full description, so i went with a thumbzilla style "14 babes links" kinda thing...

but any ideas of what i could put there instead?

**psyko514** · 06-26-2004, 10:06 PM

i like it. you just gotta fill out the links a little more.

**psyko514** · 06-26-2004, 10:07 PM

you also forgot to title your page.

**rezdesign** · 06-26-2004, 10:14 PM

thanks man!

**rezdesign** · 06-26-2004, 10:19 PM

Any insight as to what I should add to fill empty spaces?

The "Top Links" section on the right is pretty worthless right now...

**Paul Markham** · 06-26-2004, 10:20 PM

I like it, looks like a site someone has put some work into.

**NickHimself34** · 06-26-2004, 10:23 PM

I think you could also add more links to the left side of your logo in the same fashion you did on the right. You may even be able to fit a line of text below the three thumbs you have at the top for additional advertising.

And aside from the aforementioned advice, I think it looks awesome for your first TGP! You did a really good job!

**rezdesign** · 06-26-2004, 10:30 PM

Thanks guys, I appreciate the support.

Made note of those excellent suggestions, you'll definitely see them implemented soon...

If anyone has any more comments about things that has worked for them, that would be awesome too!

**jawanda** · 06-26-2004, 10:37 PM

Pretty nice man, I like it!

To fill it out, you might consider putting borders around the groups of text links that you have on the right, similar to the borders around the thumbs, but maybe a slightly different color.

Also, I would put a table border around the three thumbs at the top, or at least make them a bit bigger and lose the blue image borders. Should make that part look more put-together.

Overall, a nice mix of text and thumbs, I hope it does well for ya.

-Phil

**rezdesign** · 06-26-2004, 10:58 PM

I actually agree, I think adding those borders will really help clean the look up a bit.

I was planning on getting rid of those blue image borders, thanks for reminding me.

**darnit** · 06-26-2004, 11:15 PM

Cleverly written text links will always outperform a 468x60

**Ar3s** · 06-26-2004, 11:16 PM

I love it..
nice design ;)

**NaughtyJenn** · 06-26-2004, 11:17 PM

1 prob.. u need some naughtyjenn links in there :P

**VIPimp** · 06-27-2004, 01:04 AM

Design looks GREAT!

You just need some EpicCash hosted gals in there

also hit me up if you need traffic trade, i gotta a tgp that can trade with you.

**Ash@phpFX** · 06-27-2004, 02:47 AM

it took 6 seconds to load, thats way too slow

**pine** · 06-27-2004, 02:57 AM

Looks nice. Not crazy about the purple theme, but that's just a personal preference. No real criticisms, I'm sure it will do well for you with enough traffic.

**KRL** · 06-27-2004, 03:00 AM

Nice, but I might think about the rearranging the layout a tad so its easier to focus where to click and go.

**OzMan84** · 06-27-2004, 03:16 AM

i agree with KRL on that one, but i like the gfx, ive hit you up on icq aswell

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Check out my first TGP - advice pls

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