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Originally Posted by SmutGiant
Your content and galleries look great! Photos are very clean and crisp, I like 'em a lot. Your ads on your gallery link to http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/paul-markham-teens.php which leads to http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/freetour/tour3.htm once anything is clicked. The theme and vibe I get from both pages are completely different. You could probably seperate the two pages and create two completely seperate tours. I also agree with the join page being a little confusing for the average surfer. You look like you're off to a good start though, just thought I'd add my 
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Yes very true about the tour. We bought one in that simply did not work so went out again. This one works better and does what I wanted in terms of content, however being a designer she had to "DESIGN" and came up with this. It does convert but could do better.
This is something I'm working on myself.
http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/pornteensite/ needs work on the text but I think it could do nicely. I do not intend going the cookie cutter route, no matter how good they are there are too many of them and the surfer ignores them. Different is good.
