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Old 05-17-2002, 04:54 PM  
BrettJ
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Nice work!

(Look for a new design on DA - Coming Soon! (j/k Kris)

What I like about it - is that it gets the surfer to start interacting with the site - get them buried in there.

I think you could ask for the sale a little more.

http://tour.bubblegirls.com/members/...month/apr2002. You've got a 4th data cell open. You're probably already planning to put a join button there.

once the surfer gets to one of these pages
http://tour.bubblegirls.com/members/...2002/vanessa/1
i think you've got a good thing going again.

http://tour.bubblegirls.com/members/...a/large/img009
Nice Wet Spot!!

The only other thing i would say is
http://www.bubblegirls.com/ccbill/join.html
your tour builds up a lot of excitement, intrique, ... it titilates ... and this page doesn't really hold it up.

You probably still do great with conversions - but there is probably a little you could do to keep the hardon - stiff
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