Very nice kick Red
Perhaps in some of the footage instead of faster go with some slow motion rather than strobing cut's. Slow Motion can convey "Fast" as well if used right, especially if you can capture some of the blonde dudes anger as he pulls a number for example.
Perhaps even have em pull a ticket and have it in slow motion, cuz I almost lost the significance of what ya were trying to say.
All your angles are kick ass and the lighting is fucken outstanding.