paul, i love your work and respect you, but in my opinion only - this gallery
http://www.paulmarkhamteens.com/wmv/9291/pmt_17.htm
sucks. badly!
i honestly don't love the other one, either. still, that's only my opinion.
in view of the fact that your site is almost reality - or at least, you are the narrator, seems like you could do much better having a reality-style gallery. you could tell us about the one girl on the gallery - what her shoot was like, what was hot about her. you could tell the surfer he can see her entire video and pics at the site.
then at the bottom, i would tell him what's different and cool. you're a guy who gets to shoot these hot teen girls - barely legal girls, some doing their first photoshoots. most guys never even get to date girls like this, but you see 'em all naked, and get to fuck some.
that's how i'd sell it on the galleries and the site.
but that's just me ;-)