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  • eroswebmaster
    March 1st, 2003
    • Jul 2001
    • 20295

    #1

    Critique This TGP Please

    http://www.eroswebmaster.com/tgp/1/tgp.html

    If you're interested you can have the full design including the domain name for $150.00

    I can alter it to suit your needs.
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  • nathan_f
    Confirmed User
    • Sep 2003
    • 3983

    #2
    nice job as always.

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    • Manowar
      jellyfish  
      • Dec 2003
      • 71528

      #3
      really like the design, someone should pick this up. Looks good for a trading tgp

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      • MrIzzz
        If u touch it, I will cum
        • Sep 2003
        • 22923

        #4
        eros is gonna be making some nice TGPsssssssssssss


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        • Pipecrew
          Master of Gfy.com
          • Feb 2002
          • 14888

          #5
          -HOF should be at the top
          -not a fan of the domain name, if it was something else, it would be good. Just find a better name and redo the logo and it will sell

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          • TheMob?
            Confirmed User
            • Jan 2003
            • 8584

            #6
            will it tie in with autogallery?

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            • michel
              TheHun's Yellow Pages!
              • Mar 2002
              • 3420

              #7
              I like it!

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              • Weppel
                Confirmed User
                • Aug 2003
                • 2190

                #8
                I would equally space out the thumbs (eg. don't use 4px between every thumb in length, when you're leaving 20px between every thumb in width).

                Other than that: great one!

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                • J-Reel
                  Confirmed User
                  • Feb 2002
                  • 3782

                  #9
                  That's one hell of a Deal.

                  Nice work Eros

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                  • Spunky
                    I need a beer
                    • Jun 2002
                    • 133978

                    #10
                    Not bad at all...Too bad I hate pink

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                    • eroswebmaster
                      March 1st, 2003
                      • Jul 2001
                      • 20295

                      #11
                      Originally posted by Weppel
                      I would equally space out the thumbs (eg. don't use 4px between every thumb in length, when you're leaving 20px between every thumb in width).

                      Other than that: great one!
                      Good point...I corrected it.
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                      • r0nin
                        Confirmed User
                        • Mar 2004
                        • 415

                        #12
                        nice job

                        i personally don't like the top header,
                        i'd try to put all the weight of the image on the right, to balance the whole layout, u can notice that it's mostly balanced to the left on the days sections

                        and might argue the 'contrastability' between pink and yellow,

                        not a hater here man, just pointing my thoughts

                        u seem to know what u're doing (i checked your portfolio and liked the stuff)

                        improve your techniques, don't just stick to photoshop, it might get boring and get u stuck

                        peace

                        (excuse my english, please)

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                        • Za Ha
                          Confirmed User
                          • Oct 2001
                          • 5112

                          #13
                          headers too big
                          but nice job

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                          • zentz
                            Confirmed User
                            • Nov 2003
                            • 8062

                            #14
                            look nice
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                            • DreamCumTrue
                              Confirmed User
                              • Nov 2003
                              • 2985

                              #15
                              why is it pink?

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                              • eroswebmaster
                                March 1st, 2003
                                • Jul 2001
                                • 20295

                                #16
                                Originally posted by Za Ha
                                headers too big
                                but nice job
                                Thx...the logo can always be hahahahahahad.
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                                • eroswebmaster
                                  March 1st, 2003
                                  • Jul 2001
                                  • 20295

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by r0nin
                                  nice job

                                  i personally don't like the top header,
                                  i'd try to put all the weight of the image on the right, to balance the whole layout, u can notice that it's mostly balanced to the left on the days sections

                                  and might argue the 'contrastability' between pink and yellow,

                                  not a hater here man, just pointing my thoughts

                                  u seem to know what u're doing (i checked your portfolio and liked the stuff)

                                  improve your techniques, don't just stick to photoshop, it might get boring and get u stuck

                                  peace

                                  (excuse my english, please)
                                  I appreciate your comments..but just didn't get the part about not sticking to photoshop.
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                                  • eroswebmaster
                                    March 1st, 2003
                                    • Jul 2001
                                    • 20295

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by DreamCumTrue
                                    why is it pink?
                                    Well I was going for a cotton candy type feel...and it is a teen tgp so pastels seemed to fit better.
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                                    • Sosa
                                      In Tushy Land
                                      • Oct 2002
                                      • 40149

                                      #19
                                      looks good

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                                      • Nismo
                                        Confirmed User
                                        • May 2002
                                        • 4977

                                        #20
                                        How much do you charge for something like that?
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                                        • eroswebmaster
                                          March 1st, 2003
                                          • Jul 2001
                                          • 20295

                                          #21
                                          Originally posted by Nismo
                                          How much do you charge for something like that?
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                                          • devilspost
                                            Confirmed User
                                            • Feb 2004
                                            • 3980

                                            #22
                                            If those are supposed to be candy wrappers they could look better.

                                            I like the font and colors for Candy Coated very nice

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