lol every1 is using that skyline effect :|
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i think the skyline distracts u somehow,
but thats just me
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Originally posted by vendot
Mind -
As regards your latest two submissions, I personally like the first of the two with the ring around it and but would have liked to see some skyline within the confines of that ring. Also since youre including skyline, the fact that you made it much more faint is a vast improvement though I would suggest that "london bridge" and "big ben" should be shown as much as the "london eye" rather than hidden behind the girl.
Also, I dont think he wants any change to the existing home/faq/booking/etc tabs as they are okay and are separate to the logo image sections which can be changed easily enough.
I cant say for sure until ive shown my client but as far i am concerned these two are the best we've seen from you so far.
Good work (or to translate into less conversative US language: "they rock!")
Thanks for the comments i'm sure i can make those changes fairly easy - however my next couple of entries i'll save for a few days since apparently a lot of people are joining the contest this weekend. But i'm glad you liked it
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okay but first attempt was much better IMHOOriginally posted by thediablo
and here it is...
still trying to make a shape...
Since you liked my first entry i modified it a little so now it has the rules and stuff....
still nice compared to others though
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well it looks like you guys are all logo'd out
so wait for mine on friday
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I can't wait to see wich ones will be choose :POriginally posted by rayadp05Comment
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done :DOriginally posted by vendot
Mind -
As regards your latest two submissions, I personally like the first of the two with the ring around it and but would have liked to see some skyline within the confines of that ring.
I'm just fooling around on that part - so basically its not part of the logo - just me giving some extra "free of charge" optionsAlso, I dont think he wants any change to the existing home/faq/booking/etc tabs as they are okay and are separate to the logo image sections which can be changed easily enough.
Here it is:
and some logos to go with it
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Originally posted by mind
I'm just fooling around on that part - so basically its not part of the logo - just me giving some extra "free of charge" options
Here it is:
and some logos to go with it
lol just realised i spelled premium wrong on all the logo's - lesson to be learned dont finalize logos just before bedtime.Comment
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Nice - it reminds me of something i can't quite put my finger on..Comment
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nice jobs guysComment
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Not entirely the same but i got me thinking of this :D
Monogram of HRH. Queen of Denmark
and we seem to have a thing for crowns in denmark :D
and still it reminds me of something else too...dunno what lol..man im bored today
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Mind -
With regards to your latest submission, following feedback from my client:
(1) The font and style of the "PremiumGirls.co.uk" isnt all that strong and there should probably be some better font and spacing for the .co.uk bit aswell.
(2) The address itself should be easy to read (even away from screen) and remember. Having a totally filled in "Premium" and "Girls" part might work better. You might want to try some different color combos that have been tried before like strong red (for "Premium") with light red (for "Girls") or strong green (for "Premium") and strong red for "Girls". One of TheDiablo's entries is very strong on lettering.
(3) The london eye is incomplete if you look closely - a whole section of the wheel is just missing (terrorist attack?).
(4) The shading in the top right of the ring around the logo is slightly too strong - it should be more subtle. Its like a bit too much blusher there.
(5) The font used for "CREME DE LA CREME" and "INTERNATIONAL CALLS" (including the international number) is just not a UK style. It would be better if it was closer to whats on the existing site.
(6) You should try applying what you have to frame of the existing site to see how it looks and ensure that it fits well - this is the most crucial aspect.
Apart from that, everything else is fine and it is a vast improvement on how it looked before. More importantly, my client likes this latest submission *a lot*
With some strong adjustments, this could be the front runner."In a Time of Universal Deceit, Telling the Truth is a Revolutionary Act." - George OrwellComment
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I keep wanting to get in on this but so many ideas have been taken!
Great job designers, good to see this contest...
1) Great contest founder, I like your style and feedback Vendot.
2) Great designs and volume from the designers!
FF!
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GUYS -
Thanks for the great feedback FuckFind. I am very encouraged by the amount of positive comments I have received.
As regards taken ideas.... dont despair as same ideas can always be presented in a different way. Remember, my client doesnt seem to know exactly what he wants, just that he will know what he wants when he sees it and of course the guidelines and feedback we have given is there to give direction.
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-doneOriginally posted by vendot
(1) The font and style of the "PremiumGirls.co.uk" isnt all that strong and there should probably be some better font and spacing for the .co.uk bit aswell.
-doneOriginally posted by vendot
(2) The address itself should be easy to read (even away from screen) and remember. Having a totally filled in "Premium" and "Girls" part might work better. You might want to try some different color combos that have been tried before like strong red (for "Premium") with light red (for "Girls") or strong green (for "Premium") and strong red for "Girls". One of TheDiablo's entries is very strong on lettering.
-done (one of the carts was down for maintainence) :DOriginally posted by vendot
(3) The london eye is incomplete if you look closely - a whole section of the wheel is just missing (terrorist attack?).
- agreed, doneOriginally posted by vendot
(4) The shading in the top right of the ring around the logo is slightly too strong - it should be more subtle. Its like a bit too much blusher there.
- doneOriginally posted by vendot
(5) The font used for "CREME DE LA CREME" and "INTERNATIONAL CALLS" (including the international number) is just not a UK style. It would be better if it was closer to whats on the existing site.
- doneOriginally posted by vendot
(6) You should try applying what you have to frame of the existing site to see how it looks and ensure that it fits well - this is the most crucial aspect.
- good :DOriginally posted by vendot
Apart from that, everything else is fine and it is a vast improvement on how it looked before. More importantly, my client likes this latest submission *a lot*
Originally posted by vendot
With some strong adjustments, this could be the front runner. [/B]
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Here are a few shots:
Entry #New | 1
Entry #New | 2
Entry #New | 3
Entry #New | 4
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nice work ideasign
look like mind has a new strategy of trying to discredit the competitionComment
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? What? when? because i said the logo reminded me of something?? logos that remind a person of something aint usually a bad thing? i said it was a nice design - so i really dunno what your on about there samsamOriginally posted by samsam
nice work ideasign
look like mind has a new strategy of trying to discredit the competitionLast edited by mind; 04-14-2004, 09:03 AM.Comment
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Damn this new entries are hot
lemme think lemme think.....
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dont worry ideasign, the regal look works well in england
you can never please all the people all the time, especially those who like to use dubious tacticsComment
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Apparently you cant expect all people to have half a brain either...again, if you actually bothered to read my reply to ideasign you would notice that i wrote "Nice - it reminds me of something i can't quite put my finger on.."Originally posted by samsam
dont worry ideasign, the regal look works well in england
you can never please all the people all the time, especially those who like to use dubious tactics
I don't know what that means on your planet - but here that means "Nice design - reminds me of something.."
So if ideasign lives on your planet too i will send my deepest apologies to him because i'm not trying to put any f****** designs down.Comment
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Hi there... it's been a month since i been near a computer... anyway i am back with my version
btw, it's all full vector driven
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Originally posted by mind
Here are a few shots:
Entry #New | 1
Nice
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Nice entry there Zvik ;)Originally posted by zvik
Hi there... it's been a month since i been near a computer... anyway i am back with my version
btw, it's all full vector driven
Note: dunno if its intentional but ya spelled premium wrong in the top of the rounded logo thingy
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oops :O
well i'll fix it right away... i was working on it late at night i was kinda crushed
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Hi all, I'm brand new on GFY. But this looked like a good opportunity to test my skills, so here's my first go:
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Acouple more entries:
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Originally posted by zvik
oops :O
well i'll fix it right away... i was working on it late at night i was kinda crushed
lol i know how that is - i did the very same thing earlier in this very contest lol
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my humble entry:
Last edited by juanito; 04-15-2004, 08:31 AM.SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.Comment
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Nice
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I think i like Zvik's entry best out of this batch
it gotta be hard to decide winners from these
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zvik ya got icq?
I might have a job for u
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yup, also it is listed in my profile
anyway... 10197845Comment
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Originally posted by zvik
Hi there... it's been a month since i been near a computer... anyway i am back with my version
btw, it's all full vector driven
very fancy, yet looks much like a beer company logo(does it ?)... good nevertheless !!icq: 45649137
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subtility is not what I'm good at, so I'll refrain from taking part this time :-)
(And Zviks great entry frightens me (^_^) )icq: 45649137
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Originally posted by hentaibee
subtility is not what I'm good at, so I'll refrain from taking part this time :-)
(And Zviks great entry frightens me (^_^) )
doesnt matter, you should still take part. if anything it gets people knowing about your skillsComment
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on second thought i might agree there, it does look a lot like a beer mat.
they may not be looking for that kind of image
champagne maybe but not beerComment
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i'll be working on another entry if it looks like beer....i went for a classic look
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you probably made it while on the drinkOriginally posted by zvik
i'll be working on another entry if it looks like beer....i went for a classic look
j/k
i still like it though
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well then i've made another one
And here's the first one again:
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Something is happening to my server, it seems to gone crazy so i am just adding the links of my entries... it's a mirror server of mine:
Sorry for the multiple reply posting. :/
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Lol... the first time i saw the logo i thought exactly the same thing - however i didn't dare say anything because you might be on my back again - lolOriginally posted by samsam
on second thought i might agree there, it does look a lot like a beer mat.
they may not be looking for that kind of image
champagne maybe but not beer
I have a german beer label in my head, but cant quite remember which one :D
Still a great entry though :DComment
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Thanks dude. Will try to work on it.Comment
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nice one zvik but ya got the spelling wrong again
i think i prefer the beer mat thoughComment
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look like mind has gone back to his old tactics
j/k
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