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Originally posted by CJ_Ryan
I'm not here to bash. Good luck with your program. I'm looking at some tours now. Here are a few examples of horrible english from the TheNastyBus tour. Whoever wrote these doesn't speak or understand english very well.
When we picked up this girl we didn't have an idea of how much she enjoyed hard sex. If we had known that, we would have made her to pay our full service!!
This girl do really love money and has made such a great performance to satisfy our kinkiest desires an get some bills. Check out her ride on The Nasty Bus!!
This girl didn't know what the hell she was doing in Miami untill she found us. I mean that once she tasted my body's cock, she didn't stop suckin' & fuckin' till she got all her face drippin' creamy cum.
She basically fucks everithing she reaches. And if you give her some money, you could probably spend all day bangin' her. That's not bad idea, 'cause the vid we shoot with this slut was actually outstanding!
We definetly picked up this luxurious girl when we saw her. And we were pretty right to do so. Don't miss what this cock-hungry whore will do for some bucks!
The design and concept although not groundbreaking by far looks good. However with the text on the site/sites in the way that it is will keep most US webmasters from promoting. Simply my opinion. I have a little bit traffic and am always looking for something new. Well maybe a lot of traffic. But who's counting.
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Ryan you are funny as hell you only have a little traffic .. but i am sure that they will take a look at what you wrote and fix it .. i know that they are still having more guys reading the sites as well ... you might want to hit them up i and talk to them about traffic ..