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well IMO some of the shots are exquisite, and of course this is a very beautiful woman.
i think it would be stronger if design was more basic, less busy, less slick, more edgy---the sale will come from imagery, not phraseology. many times less is more---i would use 20 very compelling unique shots, bigger in high rez, with hot zone links to join page and alt tags for hot descriptions. These 20 compelling shots are already in the tour, but weighed down by other mediocre shots.
the layout should look NOTHING like other adult sites for maximum effectiveness.
for me color scheme is wrong.
personally i would not use any cool colors (blues, etc.) on tours dealing with erotica---they do not increase heart rates.
index page is way too busy.
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