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  • KATO
    Confirmed User
    • Sep 2003
    • 647

    #1

    Please review my new site!

    Hi guys,

    I need a small review to my new site

    http://www.yasmin-smoking.com/tour1.htm

    Thank you for all critics.

    All the best
    Kato
    Last edited by KATO; 03-25-2004, 02:50 AM.
  • KATO
    Confirmed User
    • Sep 2003
    • 647

    #2
    no critic???

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    • Shoehorn!
      Die With Your Boots On
      • Oct 2003
      • 22872

      #3
      The text is too hard to read and too close together. And there's too many of those white things flying off it that make it look like it's shimmering in the moonlight.

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      • grumpy
        Too lazy to set a custom title
        • Jan 2002
        • 9870

        #4
        looks good to me. Intresting niche to.
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        • KATO
          Confirmed User
          • Sep 2003
          • 647

          #5
          Thank you!
          Yes, the text should be correct.

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          • raceman
            Confirmed User
            • Jul 2003
            • 1064

            #6
            Well you might get Phillip Morris to sponsor the site and you will make more money.

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            • KATO
              Confirmed User
              • Sep 2003
              • 647

              #7
              Thanks Grumpy!
              yes smoking is a very good selling niche.
              I have 2(+1 new) smoking paysites and each sells very well. And smoking is a growing niche too.

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              • hova
                Traffillionaire
                • Jan 2002
                • 22430

                #8
                I like the design, but the text isn't easy to read. Interesting niche you got there
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                • KATO
                  Confirmed User
                  • Sep 2003
                  • 647

                  #9
                  Originally posted by hova
                  I like the design, but the text isn't easy to read. Interesting niche you got there
                  thanks, yes I will change the text.

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                  • savas
                    Registered User
                    • Aug 2002
                    • 1045

                    #10
                    your site looks good.
                    font used in logo is hard to read.

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                    • Lykos
                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                      • Apr 2003
                      • 31027

                      #11
                      It looks nice to me,but just change that font

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                      • Dynamix
                        G F Y not
                        • Jan 2004
                        • 2910

                        #12
                        not bad

                        the font is a little illegible, and you should definately learn the photoshop technique of layer styles. jazzing up your text a bit will improve that design ten-fold.

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                        • KATO
                          Confirmed User
                          • Sep 2003
                          • 647

                          #13
                          Originally posted by Dynamix
                          not bad

                          the font is a little illegible, and you should definately learn the photoshop technique of layer styles. jazzing up your text a bit will improve that design ten-fold.
                          Thank you!
                          I see the problem is definately the font.
                          Important critics for me, thanks.

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