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  • FunForOne
    Confirmed User
    • Nov 2003
    • 8704

    #1

    My first gallery try

    hey everyone, decided to make a gallery. This is my first try ever. I'm going by the theory of "less is more".

    Please check it out and give me contructive critisism!

    Almostplaymates.com


    thanks in advance!
  • Spunky
    I need a beer
    • Jun 2002
    • 133978

    #2
    Get rid of that text up top and place the banner lower on the page

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    • SureFire
      Confirmed User
      • Jan 2003
      • 4398

      #3
      Not bad but you probably will have better luck with that style promoting amateur sites.

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      • jact
        Confirmed User
        • Sep 2002
        • 9134

        #4
        Thumbs are hazy, layout isn't drawing their eye to anywhere specific and content looks like cheap ol' magazine scans instead of Playboy material. Start there.
        Free agent

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        • FunForOne
          Confirmed User
          • Nov 2003
          • 8704

          #5
          Originally posted by spunky1
          Get rid of that text up top and place the banner lower on the page


          NO text at all?

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          • TheMob?
            Confirmed User
            • Jan 2003
            • 8584

            #6
            i love that girl

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            • tgpmakers
              Confirmed User
              • Feb 2004
              • 575

              #7
              get rid of the empty box's apart from that not bad at all for a begginer get it submitted and see how it does.
              http://www.tgpmakers.com/

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              • Spunky
                I need a beer
                • Jun 2002
                • 133978

                #8
                The layout doesn't seem quite right...text is good but they will bypass the banner sitting up top .I suggest splitting up the pics and placeing a text description in the middle and the banner on the bottom

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                • FunForOne
                  Confirmed User
                  • Nov 2003
                  • 8704

                  #9
                  Advice taken,

                  I'm working on it now.

                  thanks again for all your advice!

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                  • Scherfi
                    Confirmed User
                    • Jun 2003
                    • 868

                    #10
                    you gonna get your ass to court with that domain
                    http://www.fastthumber.com

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                    • Pornopat
                      AdultTubeSubmits.com
                      • Dec 2003
                      • 10598

                      #11
                      The images you are using are terribly heavy....
                      140 kb is a little expensive on your bw bill.
                      You might want to aim at like 50 kb.

                      Head your ass over to other webmaterboards like newbiewebmasters or cozy frog and read all about it there.
                      https://stripcash.com/sign-up/?userI...fff832eb95ab6a

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                      • Pornopat
                        AdultTubeSubmits.com
                        • Dec 2003
                        • 10598

                        #12
                        Oh and that big pic in the middle is what is being called a "blind link'"
                        You will get rejected at a majority of tgp's for that.
                        https://stripcash.com/sign-up/?userI...fff832eb95ab6a

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                        • Manowar
                          jellyfish  
                          • Dec 2003
                          • 71528

                          #13
                          the boxes are kind of annoying , as is the blind link.

                          I think some of the good gallery designers here could help you start making quality ones

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                          • Kicker
                            Confirmed User
                            • Apr 2002
                            • 7040

                            #14
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                            • Alex Xe

                              #15
                              Nice content.

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                              • Trippekdick
                                Confirmed User
                                • Feb 2004
                                • 1756

                                #16
                                good job =)
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