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Old 11-13-2004, 03:21 PM  
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Originally posted by AdultNex
Words of harsh criticism:

1.) Personally, the logo doesn't convey a sense of professionalism. Not only is it the overly used "Impact" font, but the general "cartoonish" feel of the logo is a turn-off. Bottom line: Ditch that font and use a more distinguished and unique one.

2.) The base of the lamp doesn't seem to flow well with the text because it's merely connected to "nothing". I think it'd look better if the base were at the bottom, rather than having it hanging from the top.

3.) Ditch the stroke effect-- It doesn't flow well with the "Marketing Solutions" text that doesn't have any effects applied to it.

Edit: Seems like abyss and I have correlating opinions.
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