Critique LisaSpreads.com's new look

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  • czarina
    Webmaster Extraordinaire
    • Jul 2002
    • 10751

    #1

    Critique LisaSpreads.com's new look

    I'm currently designing LisaSpreads.com for my friend Lisa, and I came up with this look & feel:
    http://www.lisaspreads.com/2.htm
    http://www.lisaspreads.com/1.htm

    These are just flat JPGs of the PSD files. No text yet.

    Please give me your input. Critiques, suggestions, etc.

    Thanx!
    (There will also be a very amateur tour that will look pretty much like the current holding page: http://www.LisaSpreads.com )



    Please be nice, but sincere
  • bangman
    Confirmed User
    • Sep 2004
    • 5283

    #2
    Hmm... a bit too much orange for my liking, but it's a decent setup
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    • Scherfi
      Confirmed User
      • Jun 2003
      • 868

      #3
      the old one looks more "amateur" than the orange version.
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      • fuelcell
        Confirmed User
        • Jun 2003
        • 1525

        #4
        Originally posted by Scherfi
        the old one looks more "amateur" than the orange version.
        yep


        New "design" is crap. And not at all "amateur".
        Beat it. Nothing to see here.

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        • Sheri Santiago
          Confirmed User
          • Jun 2003
          • 1584

          #5
          I'd center the page too, on my monitor it's all smushed to the left.
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          • czarina
            Webmaster Extraordinaire
            • Jul 2002
            • 10751

            #6
            It is to the side, because it is just a big JPG stuck on an HTML page. Done that way just to show the design. Once it is finished, it will be centered, sliced, with texts, mouseovers, etc...

            The idea is to have an Amateur and a totally different Professional look, depending on the traffic that will be sent to it. Of course, the white version looks very amateur, that is the idea.

            About the colors: I am trying to stay away from the "good girl pinks and light blues". Since she is Hispanic, I'm going for deeper colors, more "ethnic", if there is such a thing.

            In deep blue: http://www.lisaspreads.com/3.htm

            Does it look better in blue?

            thanx!

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            • czarina
              Webmaster Extraordinaire
              • Jul 2002
              • 10751

              #7
              otherwise, what colors would you recommend? what changes to the site?

              Thank you in advance

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              • uchase/webpry
                So Fucking Banned
                • Aug 2004
                • 2085

                #8
                ... amazing what some people call design.

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                • BradM
                  Confirmed User
                  • Dec 2003
                  • 3397

                  #9
                  Looks pitiful.

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                  • enter »
                    Confirmed User
                    • Jul 2004
                    • 2362

                    #10




                    There's a few other things obviously wrong with your 'design' like the hot instant access with the first letter uncapitalized?? and that lisaspreads.com border which is just slapped over the rest of the page.

                    It needs a LOT of work
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