Hmm... How does this look?

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  • itzjamiex
    Confirmed User
    • Jun 2003
    • 124

    #1

    Hmm... How does this look?

    http://www.jizzspot.com/galleries/2B-16S.htm

    I just created this template.. Am I over doing it with my ads? How does it look?


    Appreciate it GFY'ers!
  • Rorschach
    So Fucking Banned
    • Aug 2002
    • 5579

    #2
    average... your text needs a stronger call to action and you need to talk about benefits of your features rather than the features themselves.

    and you misspelt "cable"

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    • itzjamiex
      Confirmed User
      • Jun 2003
      • 124

      #3
      alright... I fixed that.

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      • Lykos
        Too lazy to set a custom title
        • Apr 2003
        • 31027

        #4
        Yeah..fix it

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