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  • Lifer
    Confirmed User
    • Feb 2004
    • 871
    #1

    Newbie site needs advice and critique

    I have a new site named HeartbreakSoftware.com.

    The focus is to sell adult shareware that I have written and to provide traffic to affiliate sites through site reviews.

    The shareware programs are doing okay... Naughty Strip Poker, Naughty Blackjack, Naughty Crazy Eight...

    It seems that the affiliate program might be sucking hind tit. I have had about 1500 click this week... but no conversions. Maybe that is normal... I don't know.

    I just wanted to ask professionals, like yourselves to give it to me straight.

    Is the site, the way it is organized okay. What about the color scheme... content... links... content... you know what I mean.

    Any help would be welcome. Thanks
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    • bignasty
      Confirmed User
      • Nov 2003
      • 1421
      #2
      a link would be helpful
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        • Lifer
          Confirmed User
          • Feb 2004
          • 871
          #3
          http://www.heartbreaksoftware.com

          Sorry... ;.-)
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            • bignasty
              Confirmed User
              • Nov 2003
              • 1421
              #4
              i would move the reviews up a little, you can hardly see them with out scrolling down. the picture linked to your sponsor is probably getting most of the clicks, hence a lower conversion rate. at the top of the page your text "heartbreaksoftware.com" is not really clear looking. the color of the text doesnt really stick out a whole lot. i would also change background colors. the site looks kinda boring right now. well hope this helps you out.
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                • Lifer
                  Confirmed User
                  • Feb 2004
                  • 871
                  #5
                  The picture linked to my sponser is getting the clicks.

                  But isn't that the point? To send visitors from my site with a cookie through CCBill to my sponser?

                  Maybe I misunderstood.
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                    • mardigras
                      Bon temps!
                      • Feb 2003
                      • 14194
                      #6
                      Site is down for me.
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                        • bignasty
                          Confirmed User
                          • Nov 2003
                          • 1421
                          #7
                          Originally posted by Lifer
                          The picture linked to my sponser is getting the clicks.

                          But isn't that the point? To send visitors from my site with a cookie through CCBill to my sponser?

                          Maybe I misunderstood.
                          Getting them to your sponsor is the point. But you will have better conversions by them clicking a link to it (i.e. from one oof your reviews) and choosing to, not by them clicking on a blind link(your picture linked to a sponsor). Its more targeted when they make a choice to click on a link like what you have in your reviews.
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                            • sexsup
                              Confirmed User
                              • Feb 2004
                              • 3004
                              #8
                              Originally posted by Lifer
                              Any help would be welcome. Thanks
                              You have to do absolutely something for your fonts, use stylesheet for example

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                                • body
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Oct 2002
                                  • 5017
                                  #9
                                  Originally posted by sexsup
                                  You have to do absolutely something for your fonts, use stylesheet for example
                                  Yupp, looks a bit boring
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                                    • ALOTI
                                      Registered User
                                      • Sep 2003
                                      • 93
                                      #10
                                      Your Logo Text definitely needs some clean-up. Letter space is distracting. I would say avoid the "Script" typefaces, a bit touch on the reading and also they tend to get fuzzy.
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                                        • macker
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Jul 2003
                                          • 2161
                                          #11
                                          Originally posted by mardigras
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