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  • lilj
    Confirmed User
    • Dec 2003
    • 1536

    #1

    Tell me what you think please :)

    hey , how are you all doing today ..
    i just got finish with a gallery mind takeing alook and giveing some tips/etc , and i know on the frist row 3pic it's loading a 404 page i have to find out why i just cant seem to fix it i'v del . the pic and replaced it and still wont work ..
    thanks
    http://www.sexonmybeach.com/gal/teens/teen1/gal1.htm

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  • SLAiN787
    Confirmed User
    • Nov 2003
    • 693

    #2
    Every image seems to work fine. I think the gallery looks to plain, though.

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    • lilj
      Confirmed User
      • Dec 2003
      • 1536

      #3
      Thanks , anytips how to get it away for that plainness hehe

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      • modelgigtalent
        Confirmed User
        • May 2003
        • 2208

        #4
        You shouldnt underline things that are not links otherwise it looks fine.


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        • SetTheWorldonFire
          Confirmed User
          • Feb 2002
          • 7444

          #5
          your gallery looks good

          maybe bring out the text a little. Brighter colors maybe
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          • Manowar
            jellyfish  
            • Dec 2003
            • 71528

            #6
            nice gallery, design is very bland though

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            • lilj
              Confirmed User
              • Dec 2003
              • 1536

              #7
              Thanks

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              • BobChezule
                Confirmed User
                • Aug 2002
                • 779

                #8
                I would change the text to something besides Times New Roman, and punch up the English a little bit. Some of the sentences sound like an elementary school student wrote them, not to mention the spelling errors and typos.

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                • lilj
                  Confirmed User
                  • Dec 2003
                  • 1536

                  #9
                  Yes i just fould that out lol , as you can see not the best typer
                  will have it fixed thanks

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                  • Ann-Angelcom
                    Confirmed User
                    • Feb 2004
                    • 500

                    #10
                    I actually think the design is fine for what it is. The gallery is cool and you don't need fancy graphics to take away from the main purpose of the gallery which is to showcase the girl. It looks good. I always liked that simple look and white just keeps it clean. Just my opinion.
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                    • lilj
                      Confirmed User
                      • Dec 2003
                      • 1536

                      #11
                      Thank you , thats what i think too hehe

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                      • pornkitten
                        Confirmed User
                        • Dec 2003
                        • 1412

                        #12
                        thats pretty good
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                        • lilj
                          Confirmed User
                          • Dec 2003
                          • 1536

                          #13
                          Thanks

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                          • Lykos
                            Too lazy to set a custom title
                            • Apr 2003
                            • 31027

                            #14
                            Looks nice

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                            • collegeclam
                              So Fucking Banned
                              • Mar 2003
                              • 239

                              #15
                              make sure you have a link in the center of two image sections....this way if the person doesnt scroll to the bottom of the page, they still see the link at the top and center of the page.

                              does look a little plain too. maybe put a colorful background behind the table with the images.

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                              • collegeclam
                                So Fucking Banned
                                • Mar 2003
                                • 239

                                #16
                                Originally posted by Ann-Angelcom
                                I actually think the design is fine for what it is. The gallery is cool and you don't need fancy graphics to take away from the main purpose of the gallery which is to showcase the girl. It looks good. I always liked that simple look and white just keeps it clean. Just my opinion.
                                good point. i think the plain ones might be converting better as well.

                                id still put a darker bg color tho...just for a little more color.

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                                • lilj
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Dec 2003
                                  • 1536

                                  #17
                                  Thank you all

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                                  • bignasty
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Nov 2003
                                    • 1421

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by collegeclam


                                    good point. i think the plain ones might be converting better as well.

                                    I convert a lot better off plain looking galleries. looks good. might want to change the text color to make it stick out more.
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                                    • Towser
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Aug 2003
                                      • 107

                                      #19
                                      well you're trying to sell teens but that chick looks like she's in her 30's. and a bit like a trannie.

                                      just IMO

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                                      • bignasty
                                        Confirmed User
                                        • Nov 2003
                                        • 1421

                                        #20
                                        one other thing, if your gonna submit it to tgps, you may want to compress your full size images some. They are over 100k youll eat up some bandwidth with that.
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                                        • r1-mel
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Feb 2004
                                          • 168

                                          #21
                                          Do you need of gallery submit ? icq me!
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                                          • macker
                                            Confirmed User
                                            • Jul 2003
                                            • 2161

                                            #22
                                            Originally posted by Lykos
                                            Looks nice

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                                            • lilj
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Dec 2003
                                              • 1536

                                              #23
                                              Thanks

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                                              • fusionx
                                                Confirmed User
                                                • Nov 2003
                                                • 4618

                                                #24
                                                Tip: Combine the hrefs for the banner and the text URL - they go to the same place and you save a link.

                                                Just looked again - fix the HTML (html, head and title tags) and optimize for search engines (meta tags for keyword and description at the least).
                                                Last edited by fusionx; 02-12-2004, 06:42 PM.

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                                                • kalen
                                                  Registered User
                                                  • Feb 2004
                                                  • 83

                                                  #25
                                                  Not bad, that final link in the bottom has some misspelling though.
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                                                  • lilj
                                                    Confirmed User
                                                    • Dec 2003
                                                    • 1536

                                                    #26
                                                    Thanks for the tips and help

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