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Old 09-03-2004, 04:55 PM  
Boxer3
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Originally posted by freeadultcontent
Ok I am going to just say it.
1. She is often dressed way to sluty or stripper like for a non nude site such as this.
2. That tongue ring has to go. She likes to show it off to much, and thinks its "sexy". Instead of learning a good pout look.
3. She needs makeup, and a bit of it. Her face needs to look softer and not so redish. Black eyeliner and such just do not do her justice. A little teeth whiting would not hurt either.

As for the site, she is showing a little to much for a non nude site. Same with the galleries.
Also I would get some join links up on the sample pictures.
Sell the naughty tree house angle more with text.
I am not too keen on the Trix shirt, but that is your call.
The pink and red tones near bottom also seem to throw the visual off.


Ok call me names now.
No name calling necessary, that is helpful information Will note it for sure.
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