cartoon: your comments are necessary to me.

**Juicy D. Links** · 01-15-2004, 02:10 PM

your sig makes me hard

**powerbubba** · 01-15-2004, 02:17 PM

more artistic than erotic, but maybe that's your goal

**jcrow** · 01-15-2004, 02:19 PM

Originally posted by juicylinks
your sig makes me hard

sorry

I change it.

but, what you think about pictures, maybe you have some suggestions?

thank you!

**$hurik** · 01-15-2004, 02:21 PM

To my opinion, should be more realistic. Now it looks more like dolls

**J-Reel** · 01-15-2004, 02:22 PM

Intersting

**jcrow** · 01-15-2004, 02:25 PM

it's first pictures, so I'am very need in your comments now.

thank you guys!

**Vitasoy** · 01-15-2004, 02:59 PM

Either make it more cartoony or more realistic... right now it's in between...

**Greg B** · 01-15-2004, 03:13 PM

Originally posted by jcrow
Hi All

We are start drawing cartoon.
here: http://www.best-studios.com/cartoon/index.html first 6 pictures.
Please, tell me what you think.

thanks in advance!

Hey, keep up the good work.

**myjah** · 01-15-2004, 03:15 PM

they're cute. maybe i'm just not that into cartoons but they don't do alot for me.

**MrIzzz** · 01-15-2004, 03:18 PM

i like the style of the first two.

after that they get a little no-so-good

**serious** · 01-15-2004, 03:18 PM

i agree more realistic if possible

**jcrow** · 01-15-2004, 03:21 PM

Originally posted by Vitasoy
Either make it more cartoony or more realistic... right now it's in between...

thank you for the comment, I'll try

Originally posted by Greg B
Hey, keep up the good work.

thank you for the kind words

Originally posted by myjah
they're cute. maybe i'm just not that into cartoons but they don't do alot for me.

it's a first cartoons, I hope, I will make it much better very soon.

also, maybe somebody know any good cartoon tutorials?
I know this:
http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/index.htm

**Rankings** · 01-15-2004, 04:18 PM

cartoons aren't my fetish, but the artistic creation is great

**Ironhorse** · 01-15-2004, 04:27 PM

They're better than most, you can improve the linework make the black lines crisper, less faded looking.

Keep at it, looks like real potential.

**alan-l** · 01-15-2004, 04:58 PM

not good, sorry

**dotwind** · 01-15-2004, 05:02 PM

you should try working on it a bit more .. the shadows are not well done .. the face of the guy jerking off is also deformed and that's because of the sadows too.. but overall it's not bad for a start
good luck

**Ic3m4nZ** · 01-15-2004, 05:04 PM

looks good for a first timer

**ruler1** · 01-15-2004, 05:36 PM

I"m sorry i didnt get any erection

but looks good even if i am not a cartoon fan.

**skyb0lt** · 01-15-2004, 05:45 PM

I usually get hard if the wind blows, but your pics did nothing for me. They need to be more detailed, relastic, or more like a toon. RIght now they are artsy.

Your not trying to get them put on walls, your trying to get them on monitors.

Really, I like the characters. They're uniqe and should be catchy if you can get the art right.

Good luck!

SkyB0lt

**jcrow** · 01-16-2004, 01:59 AM

thank you for all your comments and suggestions,
it helps me to make next cartoons better!

Anybody knows good sites with cartoon tutorials?
please post url's.

thank you!

**Kicker** · 01-16-2004, 02:50 AM

Looks original

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