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  • lil2rich4u2
    ICQ: 175171926
    • Oct 2002
    • 11046

    #1

    Any hiphop fans here? Wanna give some feedback?

    My friends song they just finished, #1 is just the intro but i cracked up when i heard it lol

    anyhow here they are:


    www.jizzbank.com/delete/fcm/1.wma

    www.jizzbank.com/delete/fcm/2.wma

    what do you think? i like it alot actually, i was surprised when i heard it ...
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  • lil2rich4u2
    ICQ: 175171926
    • Oct 2002
    • 11046

    #2
    actually scratch #1, it doesnt have the same affect without leading right into the song lol

    so just give feedback on the #2
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    • nathan_f
      Confirmed User
      • Sep 2003
      • 3983

      #3
      I like it, despite the claps. Great production value.

      What's their name?

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      • lil2rich4u2
        ICQ: 175171926
        • Oct 2002
        • 11046

        #4
        Originally posted by nathan_f
        I like it, despite the claps. Great production value.

        What's their name?
        FCM

        dont think the name is final yet, but it stands for Fuckin Crazy Muzic
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        • TomsPics
          Confirmed User
          • Aug 2002
          • 498

          #5
          Sounds like it was made it someones basement.. If they got some professional studio time they might not be bad.
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          • lakers
            Registered User
            • Sep 2003
            • 35

            #6
            #2 is good
            with some professional help with sound & effects, it could be great record
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            • lil2rich4u2
              ICQ: 175171926
              • Oct 2002
              • 11046

              #7
              Originally posted by lakers
              #2 is good
              with some professional help with sound & effects, it could be great record
              boy you guys are like hawks heh, ive listend to it several times and never even noticed any sound effects ... im just tone deaf i think ...
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              • Ic3m4nZ
                Confirmed User
                • Aug 2003
                • 6285

                #8
                #2 is not bad.

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                • psyko514
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                  • Oct 2002
                  • 22366

                  #9
                  the track is pretty catchy, but the clap needs to go.

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                  • nap
                    Confirmed User
                    • Dec 2002
                    • 2765

                    #10
                    if they produced this themselves then they did a good job. the song isn't bad, the production is impressive.

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                    • aflex
                      Confirmed User
                      • Oct 2002
                      • 3127

                      #11
                      good production
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                      • Chris
                        Too lazy to set a custom title
                        • May 2003
                        • 27880

                        #12
                        I do a bit of work for a record lable and this is the stuff that gets sent in EVERY day ... Sounds pretty much like everything else. They could work on there voice a bit more and switch it up a bit. Lyrics need ALOT of work aswell


                        just my two cents though
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                        • MadCap
                          Confirmed User
                          • Aug 2002
                          • 2357

                          #13
                          Good flow creative lyrics but they gotta ditch the clapping on the hook. Just dosent fit.


                          Either go silent there.

                          or find a new sound.

                          Otherwise it is a pretty good track.


                          Pass it on cause if he shops that as a demo it wont get far without a few changes

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                          • Chris
                            Too lazy to set a custom title
                            • May 2003
                            • 27880

                            #14
                            Originally posted by MadCap
                            Good flow creative lyrics but they gotta ditch the clapping on the hook. Just dosent fit.


                            Either go silent there.

                            or find a new sound.

                            Otherwise it is a pretty good track.


                            Pass it on cause if he shops that as a demo it wont get far without a few changes
                            Good lyrics?
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                            • budz
                              Disruptive Innovator
                              • Sep 2003
                              • 4230

                              #15
                              yea shits been loopin... no headache yet




                              sounds decent for amateur production if that's what it is..




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                              • MadCap
                                Confirmed User
                                • Aug 2002
                                • 2357

                                #16
                                Originally posted by JupZChris
                                Good lyrics?


                                To tell the truth i listened to the intro ,first verse, and the hook and it was mostly entertainig but when the hook hit again it got annoying with that clapping shit. so i turned it off. But the intro and the hook lyrics were pretty good i thought.

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                                • username
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Aug 2003
                                  • 702

                                  #17
                                  delivery is weak, mixing/production is shitty, lyrics are just pathetic (comon entertain me), hook is definately trash. I've heard better shit while standing on a corner in new york city.

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                                  • Materialist
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Aug 2003
                                    • 739

                                    #18
                                    The clapping on the beat has got to go. It just sounds like the work of an amateur.

                                    The third verse is drowned out compared to the first two verses.

                                    Hook is above average.

                                    Verse 1

                                    Flow is hot
                                    Delivery is hot
                                    Lyrics are ehh

                                    Verse 2

                                    This guy sounds like a mix of Obie and Proof.
                                    Delivery is sick
                                    Flow is hot
                                    Lyrics are nothing new again

                                    Verse 3

                                    Compared to the first two verses, this guy sounds like he got a shot of morphine. He isn't as hype as the first two.

                                    This guy doesn't fit this beat. I'm not feeling him.


                                    I felt #2 on the solo tip the most. Overall it is an above average club track.

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                                    • maxdaname
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Oct 2003
                                      • 5193

                                      #19
                                      Great! Except for the double claps

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                                      • eiht_98
                                        Confirmed User
                                        • Jan 2001
                                        • 6103

                                        #20
                                        #2 is not that bad

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                                        • cortezzz
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                                          • Jun 2003
                                          • 955

                                          #21
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                                          • ytcracker
                                            stc is the greatest
                                            • Dec 2002
                                            • 12403

                                            #22
                                            i dig it yes
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                                            • Raf1
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                                              • Oct 2003
                                              • 12117

                                              #23
                                              #2 is pretty good.
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                                              • Martin
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                                                • Dec 2001
                                                • 17274

                                                #24
                                                I heard worse.

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