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  • phoneslut40
    Registered User
    • Aug 2005
    • 14
    #1

    hi ya huns

    okay,i redid my web site,and this time i think its much better than the old cheesy one lol..
    i dont want to spam,but i think if u see my profile u can see the link?i need some feed back,not to gain u guys as customers,but only because making my own sites is still new to me?would this be enuff for a simple lass like me to catch some ones eye?be honest,brutal if you must,just need real honesty,cause i really want to get into this,make some money why im young lol..then in long run,hire my own phone girls?im thinking out side the box lol
    everybody,happy weekend,and if you need cold brew,ive got it,
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    • adultguus
      Confirmed User
      • Jul 2004
      • 815
      #2
      I suppose you're talking about http://luciouslips.net right?

      Well the warning page looks nice, but that's about it.

      I've spend a minute on your site (which is extremely long for any future potential customer) and I still have no idea what it is I can buy on your site.

      Some points of attention for you:

      - I see you learned some flash. Please drop all of that, it doesn't help the site.
      - Purple letters on a black background give me a hard time reading the text. I'm no fan of black backgrounds other than for niches like BDSM or bizarre, but that's your choice.
      - The home link in you menu to index.html doesn't work.
      - Why do you use only such a small box on your site to display the text in. Use the space you have.
      - It is in no way clear what you're trying to sell.

      I'm not trying to be an ass here, but this will not work. It's horrible. Sorry.
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        • Soundculture
          Registered User
          • Aug 2005
          • 4
          #3
          Take a look at the sites you travel to or at least the sites you know for a fact that are pulling in money/traffic.

          Do a compare and contrast. graphics, layout, the direction your eye travles the second the page loads. Before you try and be 'different' try to at least be comprable.

          as far as flash goes, adultguus is right, drop it. Or at least dont use it for any kind of relevent information in your site.
          Last edited by Soundculture; 09-19-2005, 07:42 AM.
          "New shit has come to light, man..."

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            • AdPatron
              No commissions, no fees.
              • Apr 2003
              • 17706
              #4
              Is that a site? It's completely unuseable.

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