Fletch XXX Outdoes Himself - Look at THIS!! Affiliates are going to LOVE it!!

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  • Donny
    As you wish...
    • May 2002
    • 13754

    #1

    Fletch XXX Outdoes Himself - Look at THIS!! Affiliates are going to LOVE it!!

    I'm sure you've seen the link to TeenChloe.com in my sig. I want to offer affiliates alternate tours to send traffic to... so where do I go for such a thing? To FletchXXX of course!

    Take a look at THIS! I absolutely LOVE it:

    http://www.kinkychloe.com


    Fletch, YOU ROCK!!!
  • Joe Citizen
    Confirmed User
    • Oct 2003
    • 4552

    #2
    Very nice.

    Fletch is da man.

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    • Paul -C-
      Confirmed User
      • Aug 2001
      • 1255

      #3
      What's so special about it?

      Looks like it took 20 mins IMO

      Although I know that's the point, being a personal site n all.

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      • gornyhuy
        Chafed.
        • May 2002
        • 18041

        #4
        To make something appear simple is the touch of the master.

        icq:159548293

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        • The Other Steve
          Confirmed User
          • Dec 2001
          • 2106

          #5
          Looks good to me - it lets the girl sell herself and that's exactly the way it should be with a site like that
          Left intentionally blank ... just like my brain

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          • ytcracker
            stc is the greatest
            • Dec 2002
            • 12403

            #6
            fucking fletch great work

            u have the personal touch

            as you would say: cheers
            www.ytcracker.com | www.digitalgangster.com
            i love you

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            • dirtysouth
              Confirmed User
              • Jul 2003
              • 2613

              #7
              At the VERY far bottom right corner the line has a hiccup.

              no sig

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              • Pornwolf
                Drunk and Unruly
                • Jan 2002
                • 22712

                #8
                Fletch Lives!
                I've trusted my sites to them for over a decade...

                Webair, bitches.

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                • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                  best designer on GFY
                  • Mar 2003
                  • 30307

                  #9
                  Just cuz I am bored. I am going to butcher this tour and point out where it can do better.

                  From the very top.
                  Text reads: "My Official Modeling Site" - Fuck that.
                  Its her Sex Site where she masterbates for her members or somthing.

                  Maybe try:
                  I Am A Bad Girl! I Got 100's Of Original Videos From Home That Prove it Inside!

                  Next. Portion that reads:
                  "ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A CUTE AMATEUR GIRL WHO HAS HER OWN PERSONAL SITE?"

                  Fuck that. We know they want an amateur girl by the point they come to this page. Give em what they want.

                  Maybe Try: My Kink Is Getting Wet And Showing It All Off For My Exclusive Members!

                  Now the photo block portions... Sigh.
                  text reading: "Looking for a cute amateur girl that loves to show off her naked body?"

                  Fuck that you have asked that question 3 times now... Get to business.

                  The photo blocks goto contain info about the episode of photos the viewer is seeing.

                  For example.
                  "These photos of me are in Tahoe on a weekend get away! I booked a little secluded cabin and got video clips of all kinds of things I did! I got to say I was very horny and had quite an episode with my favorite portable Vibrator!"

                  Proceed with that sorta theme with each photo block of images. Always elude that what the visitor see's is merely a small portion of hundreds of personal sex experiences.

                  Next.
                  Very bottom... There ya go asking them the same question again. Bleh... Fucking aim for the close damnit!

                  TRY:
                  "Your are just a couple clicks away from all my newest and archived videos and Photos 100% uncensored! Try my Site Tonight!"

                  LINKS at bottom:
                  Read "MEMBERS ENTRANCE | GET FULL ACCESS | NEXT PAGE"

                  Try:
                  " MEMEBERS CLICK HERE | ACCESS THE VIP SITE NOW! | WANT TO SEE MORE?"

                  I guess basically it is merely my opinion and I oughtah just keep my mouth shut about what REALLY works versus what hundreds of designers do everyday without a thought of what the efect is for clients.
                  I can tell Fletch definatly attempted to think through this a little but it still falls short of feeling personnal for the visitor. Try not to make visitors feel like sheep by reading the same things they have already read at over 100,000 other sites in a format that appearant now at prolly over 20,000 other sites on the net.

                  My phat

                  Thanks.

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                  • alan-l
                    Confirmed User
                    • May 2003
                    • 2477

                    #10
                    I use to like Fletch's work, but this is not exactly his best, very unappealing, long blocks of little text that makes you use glasses, nothing that screams "click me!". All in all, is decent, but he can do way better than that Just my

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                    • X37375787

                      #11
                      who the fuck cares how it looks? As long as it sells... and Fletch knows how to sell.

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                      • OAEN
                        Confirmed User
                        • Nov 2003
                        • 124

                        #12
                        That scrolling thing doesnt work for me, Im on Netscape.
                        <-- I do not recommend anything that might be under my name. It's a sellout by GFY.

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                        • gornyhuy
                          Chafed.
                          • May 2002
                          • 18041

                          #13
                          Originally posted by AlienQ
                          Just cuz I am bored. I am going to butcher this tour and point out where it can do better.

                          From the very top.
                          Text reads: "My Official Modeling Site" - Fuck that.
                          Its her Sex Site where she masterbates for her members or somthing.

                          Maybe try:
                          I Am A Bad Girl! I Got 100's Of Original Videos From Home That Prove it Inside! ... [snip]
                          No man... this is trying to be an innocent "real" girl next door who has an amateur site. The whole point is to be genuine and nervous and unprofessional. All your artificial "fucky sucky" shit is the voice of a jaded pornographer dude and the surfers can smell that from a mile away.

                          icq:159548293

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                          • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                            best designer on GFY
                            • Mar 2003
                            • 30307

                            #14
                            Look who's talkin Mr. 3500+ post no life sig whore...

                            I cleared up that issue with:

                            "Try not to make visitors feel like sheep by reading the same things they have already read at over 100,000 other sites in a format that appearant now at prolly over 20,000 other sites on the net."

                            I do not like it. Its just my thoughts and my input. My fucking man... They asked and I was bored. Ya do not like it? Eat shit. I do not care. However, I am relatively certain it makes sense and all in all is a merely a generous pointer to sharpen the blade for that tour.

                            Its Fletches client and an opinion that it sucks or needs somthing more is by the god the fuck best thing anyone can offer to someone in my niche of the industry. Even if my opinion is negative it has weight to be considered whether you, Fletch or anyone else has somthing to say.

                            Infact... I should have just done what everyone else does...

                            Yay.. Great Job. Fletch. Keep it up...

                            Its just not my style to go with somthing when I think it could be better.
                            Last edited by AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE; 12-12-2003, 06:02 PM.

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                            • Spunky
                              I need a beer
                              • Jun 2002
                              • 133978

                              #15
                              Quality work Fletch as always... That Chloe is a sexy babe

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                              • Sosa
                                In Tushy Land
                                • Oct 2002
                                • 40149

                                #16
                                Nice and simple

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                                • gothweb
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Jun 2002
                                  • 8849

                                  #17
                                  I love Fletch's designs. Very simple stuff, but in just the right way.

                                  Photos by Ian X.: Distinctive photos of goth babes.
                                  Blood Money:Your traffic, my sites, our money.
                                  MojoHost: Still the best.

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                                  • stocktrader23
                                    Let's do some business.
                                    • Jan 2003
                                    • 18781

                                    #18
                                    Originally posted by AlienQ
                                    Look who's talkin Mr. 3500+ post no life sig whore...

                                    I cleared up that issue with:

                                    "Try not to make visitors feel like sheep by reading the same things they have already read at over 100,000 other sites in a format that appearant now at prolly over 20,000 other sites on the net."

                                    I do not like it. Its just my thoughts and my input. My fucking man... They asked and I was bored. Ya do not like it? Eat shit. I do not care. However, I am relatively certain it makes sense and all in all is a merely a generous pointer to sharpen the blade for that tour.

                                    Its Fletches client and an opinion that it sucks or needs somthing more is by the god the fuck best thing anyone can offer to someone in my niche of the industry. Even if my opinion is negative it has weight to be considered whether you, Fletch or anyone else has somthing to say.

                                    Infact... I should have just done what everyone else does...

                                    Yay.. Great Job. Fletch. Keep it up...

                                    Its just not my style to go with somthing when I think it could be better.
                                    Your dog fuck you in the ass this morning or something? From your first and last post pretty much everyone has deduced that you are an idiot. This isn't a gallery for Worldsex it's an AMATEUR site. So the more shit on it that looks AMATEUR the better.


                                    Nice job Fletch, this is the first design I've seen from you other than galleries. It screams "amateur girl" so much that you don't even notice all the pretty graphics.


                                    Hands Free Adult - Join Once, Earn For Life

                                    "I try to make a habit of bouncing my eyes up to the face of a beautiful woman, and often repeat “not mine” in my head or even verbally. She’s not mine. God has her set aside. She’s not mine. She’s His little girl, and she needs me to fight for her by keeping my eyes where they should be."

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                                    • lucky482
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Mar 2002
                                      • 252

                                      #19
                                      The design looks great. Clean and simple.
                                      However I think you should change most of the pictures to softcore and don't show any muff shots. Tease the surfers so they pull out their credit cards But the design is very nice.

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                                      • Sausage
                                        Confirmed User
                                        • Oct 2002
                                        • 3012

                                        #20
                                        It will sell, but it's far from a tight tour. Probably ok for an amateur site though.
                                        IW
                                        Skype : blance8888
                                        Icq : 15567120

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                                        • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                          best designer on GFY
                                          • Mar 2003
                                          • 30307

                                          #21
                                          "Your dog fuck you in the ass this morning or something? From your first and last post pretty much everyone has deduced that you are an idiot."

                                          Okies EVERYONE!
                                          I am really sorry..
                                          ALL of you.
                                          I should have said nothing at all!

                                          By fuck! Have my own opinion?? Remarkable and yet slappable for speaking it from the world renowned STOCKTRADER and His Side Kick SigWhore friend Gorny Guy whose undispubuted genious has brought us here today!!

                                          EVERYONE in Porn land here me? EVERYONE? You are out there right?

                                          OK Listen...

                                          Its good to speak your mind. Especially if you think it might help! But wait it gets better! It helpes everyone else to! Imagine that! You have a right to think! Wow!

                                          Now just because you might be afraid to speak your mind does not mean ya should not say nothing! Infact Information and opinions is what makes the world go around! Infact it is what makes us smarter!
                                          Thats right! Smarter!

                                          So next time someone tells you to go Go Fuck Yourself say...
                                          Thank you! I really needed that and I am glad you had the balls to say it to me bro!

                                          Now Fletch if you read this. I do Hope ya appreciate my feed back. I gave it to you here. Maybe next time I will Email ya my thoughts and maybe the effectiveness of design can be evolved even more in a discussion.

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                                          • gornyhuy
                                            Chafed.
                                            • May 2002
                                            • 18041

                                            #22
                                            Dumbass,
                                            its not the fact that you are voicing your opinion that is a problem, it is the blatantly incorrect and hackneyed advice you are offering.

                                            Furthermore, my response to your opinion was constructive and conversational and was not even remotely an attack.

                                            Congratulations on your exposure as a complete moron and as a defensive child.

                                            icq:159548293

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                                            • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                              best designer on GFY
                                              • Mar 2003
                                              • 30307

                                              #23
                                              Good lets blow this fucken thread up then bitches...
                                              Lets have it!

                                              You calling me a "Jaded Pornographer" is like saying "Paris Hilten is the finest bitch ever on the net!"

                                              Sorry, I am far from that and I got a bottle of Jack Daniel's that say's so.

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                                              • gornyhuy
                                                Chafed.
                                                • May 2002
                                                • 18041

                                                #24
                                                Originally posted by AlienQ
                                                Good lets blow this fucken thread up then bitches...
                                                Lets have it!

                                                You calling me a "Jaded Pornographer" is like saying "Paris Hilten is the finest bitch ever on the net!"

                                                Sorry, I am far from that and I got a bottle of Jack Daniel's that say's so.
                                                I didn't call you a jaded pornographer, I said the text you were suggesting sounds artificial, innapropriate for an amateur site, and sounds like the typical descriptions of a jaded pornographer. There is a difference.

                                                icq:159548293

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                                                • gornyhuy
                                                  Chafed.
                                                  • May 2002
                                                  • 18041

                                                  #25
                                                  Originally posted by AlienQ
                                                  Good lets blow this fucken thread up then bitches...
                                                  Lets have it!

                                                  You calling me a "Jaded Pornographer" is like saying "Paris Hilten is the finest bitch ever on the net!"

                                                  Sorry, I am far from that and I got a bottle of Jack Daniel's that say's so.
                                                  What the hell does this have to do with your Jack Daniels anyway, Cletus?

                                                  icq:159548293

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                                                  • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                                    best designer on GFY
                                                    • Mar 2003
                                                    • 30307

                                                    #26
                                                    Oh ok then...

                                                    So you got it all down pat? Ya understand how the shit works??
                                                    You know what people want and what others have to say is merely conjecture or sounding like an imbecillic opinion...

                                                    Awright.
                                                    You got the answers! What have you done that makes a difference in the Adult Industry? What makes you able to say whether or not someones work sucks or is awesome?

                                                    I will take a shot just for you on this one.

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                                                    • gornyhuy
                                                      Chafed.
                                                      • May 2002
                                                      • 18041

                                                      #27
                                                      Originally posted by AlienQ
                                                      Oh ok then...

                                                      So you got it all down pat? Ya understand how the shit works??
                                                      You know what people want and what others have to say is merely conjecture or sounding like an imbecillic opinion...

                                                      Awright.
                                                      You got the answers! What have you done that makes a difference in the Adult Industry? What makes you able to say whether or not someones work sucks or is awesome?

                                                      I will take a shot just for you on this one.


                                                      Make it a double!

                                                      icq:159548293

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                                                      • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                                        best designer on GFY
                                                        • Mar 2003
                                                        • 30307

                                                        #28
                                                        No.

                                                        I have to still be able to type through this shit!

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                                                        • x3guide
                                                          Confirmed User
                                                          • Dec 2001
                                                          • 735

                                                          #29
                                                          donovan you should show more of that chantelle girl on your main site..or sites
                                                          Shomer fuckin shabbas

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                                                          • Ice
                                                            Confirmed User
                                                            • Nov 2002
                                                            • 26053

                                                            #30
                                                            Cheers Alien
                                                            icq 1904905

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                                                            • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                                              best designer on GFY
                                                              • Mar 2003
                                                              • 30307

                                                              #31
                                                              From Other Post:

                                                              "No kidding... My wife is going into labor right now! 2nd (and final) baby should be on the way tonight! Wish us luck!

                                                              Oh and can somebody finish my gallery submissions for me?
                                                              Thanks...."

                                                              Damn Gorny I didnt know that! Congrat's
                                                              I am just trying to have fun here some, ICQ me anytime 78943384.

                                                              Sorry I do not do Submissions but congratulations on being a new Father

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                                                              • Drake
                                                                Hello world!
                                                                • Mar 2003
                                                                • 12508

                                                                #32
                                                                Look very nice and clean.

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                                                                • gornyhuy
                                                                  Chafed.
                                                                  • May 2002
                                                                  • 18041

                                                                  #33
                                                                  Originally posted by AlienQ
                                                                  From Other Post:

                                                                  "No kidding... My wife is going into labor right now! 2nd (and final) baby should be on the way tonight! Wish us luck!

                                                                  Oh and can somebody finish my gallery submissions for me?
                                                                  Thanks...."

                                                                  Damn Gorny I didnt know that! Congrat's
                                                                  I am just trying to have fun here some, ICQ me anytime 78943384.

                                                                  Sorry I do not do Submissions but congratulations on being a new Father
                                                                  Thanks man! No hard feelings, just having a fun flame war and jacking this thread for no reason!!!

                                                                  Now I REALLY need a double shot of jack.

                                                                  I'm going out the door....NOW.

                                                                  icq:159548293

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                                                                  • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                                                                    best designer on GFY
                                                                    • Mar 2003
                                                                    • 30307

                                                                    #34
                                                                    "Thanks man! No hard feelings, just having a fun flame war and jacking this thread for no reason!!!"

                                                                    No no its worth Jacking. Fletch does good work I didnt say it all sucks!

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                                                                    • Theo
                                                                      HAL 9000
                                                                      • May 2001
                                                                      • 34515

                                                                      #35
                                                                      nice work

                                                                      Fletch has his own, unique design style and this will guarantee him work as designer forever

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                                                                      • quiet
                                                                        we'll miss you our friend. RIP
                                                                        • Sep 2001
                                                                        • 25115

                                                                        #36
                                                                        killer work, as usual. fletch knows exactly what the fuck is up.

                                                                        we'll miss you our friend. RIP

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                                                                        • The Truth Hurts
                                                                          Zph7YXfjMhg
                                                                          • Nov 2002
                                                                          • 15794

                                                                          #37
                                                                          hopefully Fletch doesn't stop short reading the replies...
                                                                          you'll all get shit on your faces.

                                                                          bottom line.. it's a boring layout that if any 'outsider' put it up for critique it would've been slammed repeatedly by the same people here now singing it's praises.

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                                                                          • Brujah
                                                                            Beer Money Baron
                                                                            • Jan 2001
                                                                            • 22157

                                                                            #38
                                                                            Originally posted by AlienQ
                                                                            Just cuz I am bored. I am going to butcher this tour and point out where it can do better.

                                                                            From the very top.
                                                                            Text reads: "My Official Modeling Site" - Fuck that.
                                                                            Its her Sex Site where she masterbates for her members or somthing.

                                                                            Maybe try:
                                                                            I Am A Bad Girl! I Got 100's Of Original Videos From Home That Prove it Inside!

                                                                            Next. Portion that reads:
                                                                            "ARE YOU LOOKING FOR A CUTE AMATEUR GIRL WHO HAS HER OWN PERSONAL SITE?"

                                                                            Fuck that. We know they want an amateur girl by the point they come to this page. Give em what they want.

                                                                            Maybe Try: My Kink Is Getting Wet And Showing It All Off For My Exclusive Members!

                                                                            Now the photo block portions... Sigh.
                                                                            text reading: "Looking for a cute amateur girl that loves to show off her naked body?"

                                                                            Fuck that you have asked that question 3 times now... Get to business.

                                                                            The photo blocks goto contain info about the episode of photos the viewer is seeing.

                                                                            For example.
                                                                            "These photos of me are in Tahoe on a weekend get away! I booked a little secluded cabin and got video clips of all kinds of things I did! I got to say I was very horny and had quite an episode with my favorite portable Vibrator!"

                                                                            Proceed with that sorta theme with each photo block of images. Always elude that what the visitor see's is merely a small portion of hundreds of personal sex experiences.

                                                                            Next.
                                                                            Very bottom... There ya go asking them the same question again. Bleh... Fucking aim for the close damnit!

                                                                            TRY:
                                                                            "Your are just a couple clicks away from all my newest and archived videos and Photos 100% uncensored! Try my Site Tonight!"

                                                                            LINKS at bottom:
                                                                            Read "MEMBERS ENTRANCE | GET FULL ACCESS | NEXT PAGE"

                                                                            Try:
                                                                            " MEMEBERS CLICK HERE | ACCESS THE VIP SITE NOW! | WANT TO SEE MORE?"

                                                                            I guess basically it is merely my opinion and I oughtah just keep my mouth shut about what REALLY works versus what hundreds of designers do everyday without a thought of what the efect is for clients.
                                                                            I can tell Fletch definatly attempted to think through this a little but it still falls short of feeling personnal for the visitor. Try not to make visitors feel like sheep by reading the same things they have already read at over 100,000 other sites in a format that appearant now at prolly over 20,000 other sites on the net.

                                                                            My phat

                                                                            Thanks.

                                                                            Hey, that's some good stuff. Unlike sheep, you were honest and took the time to provide a thoughtful response that might actually help someone improve their wording. Testing, testing, and testing it some more is the only real way to see if it sells or not. Sometimes just one or two word changes can make a big difference in conversions.

                                                                            I don't think Fletch is thin-skinned and won't mind the comments, he's pretty cool.

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                                                                            • J$tyle$
                                                                              Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                              • Apr 2003
                                                                              • 11500

                                                                              #39
                                                                              Alien -

                                                                              You should drink more often!

                                                                              That "opinion" was right on point, dude!

                                                                              The design is nice ... the pics are good, but YOU ARE RIGHT my Jack swilling friend!

                                                                              These surfers maybe looking for "girl next door types" but ultimately they're there to jack the fuck off!!!

                                                                              Get them hot, move them along - and CLOSE THE FUCKIN' DEAL!!!

                                                                              Don't repeat the same inane crap over and over again!!!

                                                                              These sites SHOULD BE in the BUSINESS of SELLING!!!

                                                                              SELLING A FANTASY!!!

                                                                              ... and that's jusy my

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                                                                              • Donny
                                                                                As you wish...
                                                                                • May 2002
                                                                                • 13754

                                                                                #40
                                                                                Ultimately, it's MY opinion that counts most, since I'm Fletch's client.

                                                                                And MY opinion is: I FUCKING LOVE IT!! I couldn't be happier. And CHLOE loves it as well.

                                                                                I'd join this site in a second.

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                                                                                • JulianSosa
                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                  • Aug 2003
                                                                                  • 3042

                                                                                  #41
                                                                                  Originally posted by DonovanPhillips
                                                                                  And CHLOE loves it as well.



                                                                                  Well thats all that matters really. You got to have the model lover her site.

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                                                                                  • Lensman
                                                                                    GFY Chaperone
                                                                                    • Jan 2001
                                                                                    • 9846

                                                                                    #42
                                                                                    Originally posted by DonovanPhillips
                                                                                    Ultimately, it's MY opinion that counts most, since I'm Fletch's client.

                                                                                    And MY opinion is: I FUCKING LOVE IT!! I couldn't be happier. And CHLOE loves it as well.

                                                                                    I'd join this site in a second.

                                                                                    Bumping your own 2 day old spam threads?

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