I'm new here but I can give you my own opinion as a surfer who is now learning the adult biz bit by bit.
I hope you don't mind me being completely honest. I'm not trying to bash you or anything.
http://galleries.teenieisland.com/ja...uz/sassy-teen/
Bear in mind that the surfer is probably sitting there with his dick in his hand. Does he really want to be reminded that he is doing that? Is the use of the phrase "fuck all the bullshit" going to inspire him that by clicking he is going to get a quality product?
So, your use of this choice of words "FUCK ALL THE BULLSHIT!! GET YOUR LUBE, CUM RAG, AND CLICK RIGHT HERE TO GET ACCESS TO JAMIE. ARENT YOU TIRED OF SPANKING YOUR PUD'S TO THESE LOW RESOLUTION SMALL IMAGES???" is, IMHO, counter productive. You need something a bit more teasing.
Also, the images aren't really that teasing and don't give much incentive to click further. You need to show a little bit of pussy. Not alot, just a little.
The general design is good but the pics could do with being better quality.
The click-through page doesn't sell too well either.
http://galleries.teenieisland.com/ny...s/hotty-nylon/
Nice design but get rid of the brown colour.
Nice model but doesn't tease enough.
http://galleries.teenieisland.com/nubiles/ravon/
Design seems a bit dull in black and grey.
You might want to tell people what "nubile" actually means on the page.
The photos don't tease at all. You need to show some tits and a bit of pussy I think.
The clickthough page is good with pics of all the girls and of course the definition of "nubile", but you got to get them to clickthough first...
Anyway I hope I didn't offend and I could be completely wrong. It was just my
This is an example of something which got me interested. It still didn't tell me what "nubile" meant but what it did say to me was -
a. There are hot girls in this site
b. I can expect some reasonably explicit content
The design of that page is really simple and therefore it directs all the attention to the girl.
Again, just my
Hope I helped.