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  • RingSide
    Registered User
    • Nov 2003
    • 5
    #1

    First Free Site - Please Critique!

    Hey Homies...
    Please check out this free site (my first) and give me some constructive feedback. Don't EVEN worry about hurting my feelings. I mean....I'm a f'n Newbie! It's cool. Peace.

    Here it is.... http://www.allteencafe.com
    Last edited by RingSide; 11-21-2003, 08:37 PM.
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    • psyko514
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      • Oct 2002
      • 22366
      #2
      I think it's very nicely done
      Overall, a pretty nice design.

      You should try pushing WEGCash through it.

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        • macker
          Confirmed User
          • Jul 2003
          • 2161
          #3
          Originally posted by RingSide
          Hey Homies...
          Please check out this free site (my first) and give me some constructive feedback. Don't EVEN worry about hurting my feelings. I mean....I'm a f'n Newbie! It's cool. Peace.

          Here it is.... http://www.allteencafe.com
          It looks nice and clean, easy to navigate.

          Although, http://www.allteencafe.com/gallery01.html I would have broke the thumbs up into 2 rows and had a sponsor link in between. Banners fall away from the eye while looking at the content.

          Apart from that, looks great! Hit me up on icq if you want a good program to promote and tons of excluisive content to do it with.

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            • RingSide
              Registered User
              • Nov 2003
              • 5
              #4
              Noted. I put a text in between the pics. DO you think a banner would be better? Thanks for the input! I've posted on three different boards and the feedback has been invaluable!
              Cheers!

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                • timboss
                  Confirmed User
                  • Sep 2003
                  • 627
                  #5
                  wtf? all I see is a page 'about the google toolbar' is your site down?
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                    • PenetratinP
                      Confirmed User
                      • Aug 2002
                      • 2689
                      #6
                      looks nice....clean layout...easy to navigate

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                        • webmasterSAS
                          Registered User
                          • Nov 2003
                          • 16
                          #7

                          A well presented site maybe a banner or 2 to brake it up a little otherwise not bad.

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                            • Basic_man
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                              • Oct 2003
                              • 27360
                              #8
                              Wow, for a first one.. it's nice! Very nice desing by the way man!
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                                • Pornwolf
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                                  • Jan 2002
                                  • 22712
                                  #9
                                  That's 8 million times better than my first site years ago!
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                                    • theS2O
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                                      • Sep 2003
                                      • 4785
                                      #10
                                      for a 1st timer.
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                                        • porn-translations
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • May 2003
                                          • 202
                                          #11
                                          I like the green background! First teen page without a pink background! Very nice idea!

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                                            • Ic3m4nZ
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Aug 2003
                                              • 6285
                                              #12
                                              Pretty good for a starter.

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                                                • Gruntled
                                                  Confirmed User
                                                  • Aug 2003
                                                  • 358
                                                  #13
                                                  WTG kid! Looks like a winning design. I hope it brings you buckets of cash. you may want to experiment withb changing out the text between the rows of thumbs with a banner, or a mixture of text links and a banner, just to see which way you like it better. Great job!

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                                                    • RingSide
                                                      Registered User
                                                      • Nov 2003
                                                      • 5
                                                      #14
                                                      Wow...thanks for all of the encouraging comments. Now if I can only get some traffic...

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                                                        • konduct
                                                          Registered User
                                                          • Oct 2003
                                                          • 326
                                                          #15

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