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Originally posted by charly
OK then.
The first thing I see is YELLOW/ORANGE TINT
The next thing are two bored disinteresting girls who I suspect have little intention of fucking anyone, not good on a site promising girls "HOT & HORNY" & "INNOCENT GIRLS PLAYING AROUND? NO WAY THEY ARE HOT AND HORNY"
Get some pictures that match the words.
Second page, another girl who looks bored and no intention of fucking the shooter. And two girls in a video frame that are not good enough for tours.
Again the colours are wrong.
Third page, more of the same girls, but at least one of these is attractive, at last, doubt if many surfers willing to spend $30 a month will get this far.
Over all I would say your design skills lack a little, the colour is off putting enough to stop me reading the text and I woluld not want to pay to join a site with this tint.
Your knowledge of what is porn is very poor. Look at the pictures and tell me the one girl who look like she is ready to fuck anyone.
Sorry to be harsh but this is what I consider the truth, you got a deal on pictures because the shooter had probably had problems selling them for the right price.
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We need more constructive critisism here like this. Most are afraid to be so helpful & revealing and to be so specific in thier critique...
Thanks alot Paul.
