the first one is gay. can you read all that type and those graphics at normal buisness card resoloutin? i like the bottom one if made me laugh.
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didn't realize it was two sided because i was too stoned when reading. maybe just take some of the type and the "jack of all trades" thing off the front of it. make it a little less cluttered.
The back is alright, but the front could use some work. The light blue at the top and the white is not working. Needs more contrast. Also, your name at the top of the card would look best legible. The card doesnt need a line break at the top.
Have you seen Sleazydream's business card? I saw a picture of one in a thread (dont remember which one), but they're bad ass.
Originally posted by JupZChris I am by no means a graphics artist
I just got bored and pardon the fonts i have zero fonts on my computer.
ytcrack HOLLA BACK
One critique I had on the front...looks like the pixel font is anti-aliased. With pixel fonts it makes em look sorta blurry, and sort of defeats the whole purpose of them. Other than that...good stuff.
Oh, and I should add:
When designing business cards...I'd have to say: simple is best. yours seem very busy. Decide whats important and focus on that. You may be going for the jack of all trades thing...but you dont neccesarily need to list everything
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