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Little to heavy on the Duo tone photos.
Nice composition though, however it does not tell me to subscribe well enough.
Video clip audio reminds me of "The Mushroom Song"
Pst tis pst tis pst tis pst tis....
Deep tones sell sex better than treble.
Stick with E and D tones.
In other words the audio is not "Sexy" enough.
The clip should sell memberships with some text messages or somthing.
On the good side you got the excellent eye contact going and the suductive looks poppin with great presence.
Its not you, its the structure.
Also if it helps...
Sell You or Aria. Otherwise you are competing and taking a chance.
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