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Old 06-12-2004, 07:41 AM  
CBytch
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Toronto
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First off I'd pick a different font. There's also too much space between the words- her first anal sex and push it in. I also think the words push it in are too far over to the left move them over to the right some. Also the description of her becomes hard to read if made smaller.
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