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as a critique the only thing i would do is make it edgy visually and write perhaps funny or off-the-wall copy.
this particular style is a very common design motif---so i would mix it up a little from page to page, and occasionally throw in a big very high quality still so surfer can get a quality sample (such as blacksonblondes does) if appropriate.
otherwise, i'm confident this stuff will sell. nice job.
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