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**tootie** · 10-16-2003, 10:04 AM

First thing I notice is that you need to antialias the text on the graphics.

There are also some spelling errors. Like tinny, Winny on the second page. I think you mean teeny-weeny, or teenie-weenie. And "Course our samples are 1.5mb!" It would be "Of course" not "Course". Just a couple of examples.

I would also suggest putting a row of several small thumbs at the top of the pages under the logo. Maybe several small 75x75 square thumbs. Don't link them to anything, but make them hot. Just focus in on really hot girls faces or butts or breasts. You want them to see a BIG variety of different stuff, make them know you have ALOT of variety inside.

**Stud Money** · 10-16-2003, 11:14 AM

OMG Its SnagglePuss

**Stud Money** · 10-16-2003, 11:15 AM

**Stud Money** · 10-16-2003, 11:16 AM

Originally posted by Stud Money

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**EZRhino** · 10-16-2003, 11:16 AM

**Stud Money** · 10-16-2003, 11:17 AM

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