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  • Sambo
    So Fucking Banned
    • Mar 2004
    • 1187

    #1

    I swore I would never do this... but

    I have extra Prozac at the ready.......

    I have just started on a ARS Champs site and I would like some feedback!?!

    http://www.housewifesexpics.com/

    Ignore the domain.... just needed someplace to put it

    Its the first time I have tried this type of site so be gentle.... constructive critisism only please (who am I kidding?)

    Thanks
  • herbal logic
    Confirmed User
    • Feb 2004
    • 1172

    #2
    the url tricked me into looking at gay sex

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    • Sambo
      So Fucking Banned
      • Mar 2004
      • 1187

      #3
      Oh yea WARNING.... Its a gay site!!

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      • NickPapageorgio
        Confirmed User
        • Apr 2004
        • 8323

        #4
        Originally posted by herbal logic
        the url tricked me into looking at gay sex
        I concur...

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        • DR_PHIL
          Confirmed User
          • Oct 2002
          • 4099

          #5
          lol

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          • Sambo
            So Fucking Banned
            • Mar 2004
            • 1187

            #6
            Im sure u arnt all that squeamish about a bit of gay sex??

            And was that lol at my site or at the others getting duped into thinking they were going to get some free MILF?

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            • webmaster x
              Confirmed User
              • Mar 2004
              • 4400

              #7
              A gay site?
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              • Sambo
                So Fucking Banned
                • Mar 2004
                • 1187

                #8
                OK...> So now we have worked out it is a gay site.....

                But is it OK?

                Feedback please!!

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                • doober
                  Confirmed User
                  • Jul 2003
                  • 6984

                  #9
                  the domain got me hard the content got me soft

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                  • EviLGuY
                    So Fucking Banned
                    • Apr 2003
                    • 12745

                    #10
                    Looks alright.. the 1 pixel outline around the text looks a little fucked up.. I'd go 2-3 pixels.

                    I can't comment on the content..

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                    • SureFire
                      Confirmed User
                      • Jan 2003
                      • 4398

                      #11
                      With that domain show some guys being 'housewifes'

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                      • Sambo
                        So Fucking Banned
                        • Mar 2004
                        • 1187

                        #12
                        Originally posted by EviLGuY
                        Looks alright.. the 1 pixel outline around the text looks a little fucked up.. I'd go 2-3 pixels.

                        I can't comment on the content..
                        Thanks.... thats exactly what Im looking for

                        The domain was just a place to put it..... It will be hosted by ars when it goes live

                        BTW.... the domain is for sale

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                        • jayeff
                          Confirmed User
                          • May 2001
                          • 2944

                          #13
                          I agree that you should try a 2 pixel stroke, but my main observation is that you are selling high-quality DVD movies (okay, so in some the production values aren't great, but generally the standard is pretty high) via some fairly low-quality images.

                          It isn't the easiest thing to get decent looking pics from the screen caps CHAMP provide you with, but this program has no trial, so IMO you really do need to put some work into color- and level-balancing the thumbs.

                          Next, you talk about a "massive online collection" but only mention two movies (and I didn't see you say anywhere that these are full-length movies). Maybe you planned a longer page or more pages, but anyway, work in some info about more of the content that is available.

                          To be really nit-picking, my choice for a media player frame would be for one of the new skins. The one you used is very old (reminiscent of the dialer thumbs on some TGPs) and it might impact negatively on some of your surfers.

                          ...and I assume you are going to do some serious optimization before you submit the site.

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                          • Sambo
                            So Fucking Banned
                            • Mar 2004
                            • 1187

                            #14
                            Originally posted by jayeff
                            I agree that you should try a 2 pixel stroke, but my main observation is that you are selling high-quality DVD movies (okay, so in some the production values aren't great, but generally the standard is pretty high) via some fairly low-quality images.

                            It isn't the easiest thing to get decent looking pics from the screen caps CHAMP provide you with, but this program has no trial, so IMO you really do need to put some work into color- and level-balancing the thumbs.

                            Next, you talk about a "massive online collection" but only mention two movies (and I didn't see you say anywhere that these are full-length movies). Maybe you planned a longer page or more pages, but anyway, work in some info about more of the content that is available.

                            To be really nit-picking, my choice for a media player frame would be for one of the new skins. The one you used is very old (reminiscent of the dialer thumbs on some TGPs) and it might impact negatively on some of your surfers.

                            ...and I assume you are going to do some serious optimization before you submit the site.
                            Thats great .... Thanks

                            As I said its my first one so all this stuff is great advise

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                            • Mr. Marks
                              Confirmed User
                              • Jun 2001
                              • 7517

                              #15
                              Damn cool gay site!

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                              • reynold
                                Too lazy to set a custom title
                                • Oct 2002
                                • 51271

                                #16
                                Is this your first site or your first gay site?

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                                • newsdude
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Apr 2004
                                  • 1969

                                  #17
                                  Not bad!
                                  SIG TOO BIG! Maximum 120x60 button and no more than 3 text lines of DEFAULT SIZE and COLOR. Unless your sig is for a GFY top banner sponsor, then you may use a 624x80 instead of a 120x60.

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                                  • iDiz
                                    Confirmed User
                                    • Apr 2004
                                    • 1522

                                    #18
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