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  • optikalz
    Confirmed User
    • Dec 2001
    • 555
    #1

    HELP!!! Please critique my XXX Cartoons

    Im not sure if most sites want strictly ANIME/HENTAI style art or a combo of "American" realistic type cartoons with hints of Anime/Hentai. Here's some of my artwork.


    Feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!




    Here's another sample




    Im thinking of selling EXCLUSIVE custom made cartoons for $1 a panel, Let me know what you guys think.
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    • optikalz
      Confirmed User
      • Dec 2001
      • 555
      #2
      bump

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        • JD
          Too lazy to set a custom title
          • Sep 2003
          • 22651
          #3
          toons are a little weird for me but those are pretty kewl

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            • tootie
              Confirmed User
              • Jun 2003
              • 6041
              #4
              Great stuff! I wish I had some huge versions so I could try my hand at coloring them


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                • optikalz
                  Confirmed User
                  • Dec 2001
                  • 555
                  #5
                  Originally posted by tootie
                  Great stuff! I wish I had some huge versions so I could try my hand at coloring them
                  Thanks Tootie. How about a swap, I give you exclusive toons, you build a BYOT I can use based on some of my other toons?

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                    • optikalz
                      Confirmed User
                      • Dec 2001
                      • 555
                      #6
                      bumpz

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                        • damonx
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                          • Jun 2003
                          • 1112
                          #7
                          good job

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                            • tootie
                              Confirmed User
                              • Jun 2003
                              • 6041
                              #8


                              Real quickie color job. It could have looked much better with the original scan and if I'd spent more than a few minutes. But it was fun.

                              E-mail me at eightiesgirl =at= comcast dot net if you wanna talk about maybe arranging something.


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                                • optikalz
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Dec 2001
                                  • 555
                                  #9
                                  Originally posted by tootie


                                  Real quickie color job. It could have looked much better with the original scan and if I'd spent more than a few minutes. But it was fun.

                                  E-mail me at eightiesgirl =at= comcast dot net if you wanna talk about maybe arranging something.
                                  Tootie, GREAT coloring work! What did you use? Photoshop? or hand colored?

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                                    • optikalz
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Dec 2001
                                      • 555
                                      #10
                                      bumpy

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                                        • tootie
                                          Confirmed User
                                          • Jun 2003
                                          • 6041
                                          #11
                                          Originally posted by linkyd


                                          Tootie, GREAT coloring work! What did you use? Photoshop? or hand colored?
                                          Photoshop


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                                            • CashGordon
                                              at your service
                                              • Apr 2003
                                              • 1201
                                              #12
                                              really good, congratulations, pls email me some of your works

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                                                • optikalz
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                                                  • Dec 2001
                                                  • 555
                                                  #13
                                                  bumpster

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                                                    • candyflip
                                                      Carpe Visio
                                                      • Jul 2002
                                                      • 43073
                                                      #14
                                                      I like them a lot better than some of the other toons I've seen here on the board.


                                                      Spend you some brain.
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                                                        • optikalz
                                                          Confirmed User
                                                          • Dec 2001
                                                          • 555
                                                          #15
                                                          Originally posted by candyflip
                                                          I like them a lot better than some of the other toons I've seen here on the board.
                                                          thanks, man.

                                                          Would a site based on this type of art do just as well or better than Hentai/Anime?

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                                                            • optikalz
                                                              Confirmed User
                                                              • Dec 2001
                                                              • 555
                                                              #16
                                                              bumperooski

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                                                                • optikalz
                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                  • Dec 2001
                                                                  • 555
                                                                  #17
                                                                  bumpin for critiques/tips

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                                                                    • Roxxy
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                                                                      • Apr 2002
                                                                      • 602
                                                                      #18
                                                                      wow, cool stuff!

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                                                                        • cath
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                                                                          • Jun 2003
                                                                          • 268
                                                                          #19
                                                                          Those are awesome How can you afford to consider $1 a panel for exclusive...?
                                                                          ...

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                                                                            • Tex Willer
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                                                                              • Apr 2002
                                                                              • 1105
                                                                              #20
                                                                              Originally posted by linkyd
                                                                              Would a site based on this type of art do just as well or better than Hentai/Anime?
                                                                              this quality - yes

                                                                              very good works

                                                                              now as you want to start selling them for a buck
                                                                              i'll buy out everything that you produce for $3 per panel
                                                                              must be the same style and quality as color01.jpg
                                                                              and cleaned up

                                                                              mark at rc-cash.com
                                                                              this is a serious offer

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                                                                                • optikalz
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                                                                                  • Dec 2001
                                                                                  • 555
                                                                                  #21
                                                                                  Originally posted by cath
                                                                                  Those are awesome How can you afford to consider $1 a panel for exclusive...?
                                                                                  Drawing and animation is my passion so the price is fine by me. I also enjoy bringing to reality client's cartoon ideas.

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                                                                                    • optikalz
                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                      • Dec 2001
                                                                                      • 555
                                                                                      #22
                                                                                      Thanks, Tex. Is black and white okay or full color or maybe "wash color"?

                                                                                      I can produce about 50 a week. Also send me your ideas for panels so I can produce them custom exclusive for you.



                                                                                      Originally posted by Tex Willer


                                                                                      this quality - yes

                                                                                      very good works

                                                                                      now as you want to start selling them for a buck
                                                                                      i'll buy out everything that you produce for $3 per panel
                                                                                      must be the same style and quality as color01.jpg
                                                                                      and cleaned up

                                                                                      mark at rc-cash.com
                                                                                      this is a serious offer

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                                                                                        • Tex Willer
                                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                                          • Apr 2002
                                                                                          • 1105
                                                                                          #23
                                                                                          Originally posted by linkyd
                                                                                          Thanks, Tex. Is black and white okay or full color or maybe "wash color"?

                                                                                          I can produce about 50 a week. Also send me your ideas for panels so I can produce them custom exclusive for you.
                                                                                          colored like color01.jpg just get rid off the grey lines and min height/width must be 600 pixels when shrinked down

                                                                                          send me email

                                                                                          i have scripts ready, we can start with pinups and/or short comics

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                                                                                            • Greg B
                                                                                              So Fucking Banned
                                                                                              • Jul 2001
                                                                                              • 7014
                                                                                              #24
                                                                                              Nice work! Don't sell yourself cheap!!!

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                                                                                                • optikalz
                                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                                  • Dec 2001
                                                                                                  • 555
                                                                                                  #25
                                                                                                  Tex,

                                                                                                  Sounds great! I'm interested in producing pin up/hardcore panels and maybe later comixxx once you have ideas re characters/storyline, etc.


                                                                                                  Linky D

                                                                                                  Originally posted by Tex Willer


                                                                                                  colored like color01.jpg just get rid off the grey lines and min height/width must be 600 pixels when shrinked down

                                                                                                  send me email

                                                                                                  i have scripts ready, we can start with pinups and/or short comics

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                                                                                                    • Hentaikid
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                                                                                                      • Nov 2002
                                                                                                      • 1250
                                                                                                      #26
                                                                                                      1$ for exclusive? That's ridiculous! You'd make more money opening your own AVS or pay site.

                                                                                                      Grab a chronometer and time yourself next time you do a pic and then calculate your hourly rate. I know some real quick artists who could do that sort of art in 15 minutes, but even then (Which is REAL quick) you're talking about 4$ per hour. McDonalds pays better, I think.

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                                                                                                        • MetaMan
                                                                                                          I AM WEB 2.0
                                                                                                          • Jan 2003
                                                                                                          • 28682
                                                                                                          #27
                                                                                                          those are radddd man, i hate most peoples crappy design work, or drawing work. but that is some nice ass sheeet.

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                                                                                                            • stevecore
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                                                                                                              • May 2003
                                                                                                              • 6130
                                                                                                              #28
                                                                                                              nice stuff! looks very nice

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                                                                                                                • Honeyslut
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                                                                                                                  • Jan 2001
                                                                                                                  • 6436
                                                                                                                  #29
                                                                                                                  Make sets and sell them yourself.
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                                                                                                                    • Honeyslut
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                                                                                                                      • Jan 2001
                                                                                                                      • 6436
                                                                                                                      #30
                                                                                                                      You could also broker them at places like fetishbrokers.com
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                                                                                                                        • alias
                                                                                                                          aliasx
                                                                                                                          • Apr 2001
                                                                                                                          • 19010
                                                                                                                          #31
                                                                                                                          nice!
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                                                                                                                            • optikalz
                                                                                                                              Confirmed User
                                                                                                                              • Dec 2001
                                                                                                                              • 555
                                                                                                                              #32
                                                                                                                              Originally posted by Honeyslut
                                                                                                                              You could also broker them at places like fetishbrokers.com
                                                                                                                              How do brokerage partnerships work? what is the % of the broker?

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                                                                                                                                • optikalz
                                                                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                  • Dec 2001
                                                                                                                                  • 555
                                                                                                                                  #33
                                                                                                                                  Originally posted by Hentaikid
                                                                                                                                  1$ for exclusive? That's ridiculous! You'd make more money opening your own AVS or pay site.

                                                                                                                                  Grab a chronometer and time yourself next time you do a pic and then calculate your hourly rate. I know some real quick artists who could do that sort of art in 15 minutes, but even then (Which is REAL quick) you're talking about 4$ per hour. McDonalds pays better, I think.
                                                                                                                                  Hmmm interesting points. But I draw very quickly and I draw for fun. Good points you made though.

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                                                                                                                                    • optikalz
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                                                                                                                                      • Dec 2001
                                                                                                                                      • 555
                                                                                                                                      #34
                                                                                                                                      by the way, thanks for all the great feedback so far.

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                                                                                                                                        • tootie
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                                                                                                                                          • Jun 2003
                                                                                                                                          • 6041
                                                                                                                                          #35
                                                                                                                                          bump

                                                                                                                                          His work deserves to be seen more


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                                                                                                                                            • optikalz
                                                                                                                                              Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                              • Dec 2001
                                                                                                                                              • 555
                                                                                                                                              #36
                                                                                                                                              Thanks, Tootie!

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                                                                                                                                                • Nickless
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                                                                                                                                                  very nice work!
                                                                                                                                                  how much would you charge for a logo? (cartoon character only)

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                                                                                                                                                    • optikalz
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                                                                                                                                                      • 555
                                                                                                                                                      #38
                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by Nickless
                                                                                                                                                      very nice work!
                                                                                                                                                      how much would you charge for a logo? (cartoon character only)
                                                                                                                                                      I mostly do only panels and comixxx.

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                                                                                                                                                        • Ironhorse
                                                                                                                                                          Pixel Pusher
                                                                                                                                                          • Nov 2002
                                                                                                                                                          • 7094
                                                                                                                                                          #39
                                                                                                                                                          That's pretty good work. I hope you erase the pencil in the finals. Do more and start your own AVS and then member site. You will need to produce quite a bit more though.
                                                                                                                                                          [email protected]

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                                                                                                                                                            • MSB
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                                                                                                                                                              #40
                                                                                                                                                              nice!


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                                                                                                                                                                • Hardcore J
                                                                                                                                                                  Hardcore 4 Life™
                                                                                                                                                                  • Mar 2003
                                                                                                                                                                  • 2553
                                                                                                                                                                  #41
                                                                                                                                                                  Looks really good!

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                                                                                                                                                                    • optikalz
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                                                                                                                                                                      • Dec 2001
                                                                                                                                                                      • 555
                                                                                                                                                                      #42
                                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by Ironhorse
                                                                                                                                                                      That's pretty good work. I hope you erase the pencil in the finals. Do more and start your own AVS and then member site. You will need to produce quite a bit more though.
                                                                                                                                                                      Im working on 50 to 60 a week. Although Im sure the coloring will cut into my production time.

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                                                                                                                                                                        • wookie
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                                                                                                                                                                          • Aug 2003
                                                                                                                                                                          • 5
                                                                                                                                                                          #43
                                                                                                                                                                          Linkyd, Awsome, nice work


                                                                                                                                                                          Tootie, thats really fast and decent color work!


                                                                                                                                                                          Do either of you have sites to show off your art?
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                                                                                                                                                                            • optikalz
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                                                                                                                                                                              • Dec 2001
                                                                                                                                                                              • 555
                                                                                                                                                                              #44
                                                                                                                                                                              Originally posted by wookie
                                                                                                                                                                              Linkyd, Awsome, nice work


                                                                                                                                                                              Tootie, thats really fast and decent color work!


                                                                                                                                                                              Do either of you have sites to show off your art?
                                                                                                                                                                              Nope, not yet. Thinking of building AVS sites beside selling custom artwork.

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                                                                                                                                                                                • h2ohjosh
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                                                                                                                                                                                  • Sep 2003
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                                                                                                                                                                                  very nice linkyd,
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                                                                                                                                                                                    • Bman
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                                                                                                                                                                                      • Aug 2003
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                                                                                                                                                                                      hey you do animation? looking for some one to do 3-5 second clip o full frome animation calvin and hobbes style??????
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                                                                                                                                                                                        • chuk
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                                                                                                                                                                                          • Mar 2003
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                                                                                                                                                                                          #47
                                                                                                                                                                                          Those are the SHIT! I wish I had a dollar...

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                                                                                                                                                                                            • tootie
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                                                                                                                                                                                              Originally posted by wookie

                                                                                                                                                                                              Linkyd, Awsome, nice work

                                                                                                                                                                                              Tootie, thats really fast and decent color work!

                                                                                                                                                                                              Do either of you have sites to show off your art?
                                                                                                                                                                                              Thanks, wookie

                                                                                                                                                                                              Unfortunately I'm not that great at drawing, but I'm learning. Coloring is what I do best for now.

                                                                                                                                                                                              I DO, however, create 3D rendered erotic art. Dont have a site yet, but here are a couple of samples if you care to see:

                                                                                                                                                                                              http://www.extremedaily.com/3d/


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                                                                                                                                                                                                • misfit-one
                                                                                                                                                                                                  So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                                                                                                                  • Sep 2003
                                                                                                                                                                                                  • 14
                                                                                                                                                                                                  #49
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                                                                                                                                                                                                    • optikalz
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                                                                                                                                                                                                      • Dec 2001
                                                                                                                                                                                                      • 555
                                                                                                                                                                                                      #50
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by Bman
                                                                                                                                                                                                      hey you do animation? looking for some one to do 3-5 second clip o full frome animation calvin and hobbes style??????

                                                                                                                                                                                                      Thanks for the compliments and tips guys, I appreciate it!!!

                                                                                                                                                                                                      BMAN,

                                                                                                                                                                                                      Do you have a link to an existing type of cartoon you want animated? will it be X RATED?

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