I wouldn't put a tgp2 gallery on a freehost, but hey... everyone is different. The snapshot pics are not very good quality - I'm not begging for more. Get some good pics and make 'em want more, unseenworld.com content is perfect for promoting exploited teens as it has the same amateur/teenish feel to it.
Big text, get their attention. But with big text you don't have much room to chat, which is good because that takes less reading, and patience is something that gallery surfers just don't have. If you can't find a happy balance then just keep it short.
Here is one of my galleries
http://adult.hahsex.com/tgp2/01003/index.html
Too many breaks/non-breaking spaces at the end of the gallery, be fair. The footer doesn't need to be right up your gallery's ass, however stick to the max of three to four BR tags at the page end - 404ed galleries don't tend to make much cash for anyone besides the freehost.
On another note, I just found this at Google -
