Hentai Madness looks good, be careful how far you push the "school girls" angle.
page3.html does not fit the flow. Perhaps have something about flash animation, or maybe a little more emphasis on the EXTRA stuff being extra.
I liked DarkCherries, LezCandy looked pretty good, TeenLicks looked like "just another teen site". I liked the look of the celeb site - you could blag us that the blurred photos where deliberate quite easily.
Make mafiaporn the webmaster site, not a surfer site
but looks good.