I think she looks like a crack whore with makup. Look at those protruding ribs. Yuck. I like mine with a little BBQ on the side. Well done please. Really
I wont give advice to another competitor in a forum, you have my ICQ...
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That is 200% better than that last set of pics you posted. Good simple lighting, and a nice composition. Good job man!!!
Once you start feeling more comfortable with your lighting, you can start working on a rapport with your girls - I swear to god...she looks like she is going to beat the shit out of you! I don't find that very sexy - but some people might
I think that is Ashley Long right? I shot some hardcore stills and a box cover of her for a Patrick Collins Movie (Elegant Angel) about 6 months ago - she is one nasty girl - takes it anyway you wanna give it to her
Another thing that takes some practice is editing. Going thru all the pics that you shot in a day and trashing the pics that don't flatter your model "and" your work as a shooter.
You'll get it man - just hang in there and don't expect to be producing top-notch high-quality shit over night. It takes time to fine-tune your skills and find your style.
Originally posted by Ketadream I wont give advice to another competitor in a forum, you have my ICQ...
I personally don't have a problem giving advice in public - I know there are others out there who are just passing thru and perhaps they can learn a little something as well. There's been a lot of people give me advice over the years - I am happy to "pass it on"
I went to see your website - and although your splash is up - nothing else is - in case you didn't know???
Originally posted by Mutt i sent Joe to Brian the Wanton photographer today to get some advice. Joe is a good guy and will return the favor I'm sure.
i don't know shit about photography EXCEPT what looks good to my eye. Brian said "Joe needs new glass". Said good lenses will take care of alot of it.
I have to agree on the glass part. What he really needs (from what I can tell) is a longer lens that'll let him shoot more open (f2.8, f4 etc.). That pic could have been better with more of the background blurred out.
But, I think Joe is on his way. The fact that he knew his photography could use a little fine tuning and wasn't "too good" to take some advice from a good shooter tells me a lot about Joe. You never stop learning Joe - God Speed!
Thanx Dean, yes I went out and bought a new lens that Brian reccommended..and he gave me some positioning pointers. My thing is to improve little at a time. Learn from each set. My videos sell very well. So time to start getting the still quality up there
Nice girl and nice pose. It looks like you're using tungsten lighting, and if that's the case, you need to get off that right away. Also, you need to open up your F Stop for a much shorter depth of field.
But what the hell do I know? I kind of blew the D.O.F. here:
I was going to say the same as Lens abotu the lighting
also what i want to know is
what is that little flesh coloured triangle I can see abover her left nipple??
must be the back of a chair or somethign - but it makes her look she has some sort of growth
always be aware of whats in the background .. you don't want trees or poles coming out of ppls heads liek bunny ears - or in this case an object looking like some mutant booby
I saw a cock like that once.
Seeing it was ALL I did... I left!!
Wasn't NO WAY that thing was getting anywhere near me... damn thing looked like it was gonna growl and eat me or something, all heaving and throbbing and shit... it was HUGE!
*shiver*
BTW the original pic looks great - only thing I can think of is to make it a little crisper and brighter, pic-wise. (Not sure how you'd accomplish that technically.)
Girl-wise... feed her a few happy meals and tell her it's OKAY to eat food, maybe she'll cheer up ;)
All that starvation leads to grumpiness - look at the bbw gals, they're always happy and smiling!
Joe, your lighting is much better, i agree with dean you might want to coach your model a little more.. but with a little photoshop processing (yes that is required)
i retouched that in 3 minutes.
also, you'll notice i blurred out the distracting background.. depending if you want to go there or not you could even through in a backdrop of some sort.
Originally posted by =^..^= I love that pic what a classic
she looks like she's trying VERY hard to be seductive
but deep down she's scared as hell of that big cock
LOL! It looks to me like he's trying like hell to talk her into fucking him -- "No baby, it won't hurt at all, I swear, you'll love it..."
And also, all I can think of is "Ewwww! He's sitting there bare-assed with his buttcrack and sweaty balls on someone's nice light-colored couch! I hope that thing's scotch-guarded..."
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