what do you think of...

Very mundane...the major selling points don't stand out and its a poor rework of an outmoded layout...

I think you should've hired someone over at www.explicit-design.com

Not bad, i'd add a lil more color, change the text in the middle, and use pix with more eye contact!

needs more lesbians.

actually I think there are too many pix (I hate to say) I get lost in it's clutter of lesbians.

I'd move the vertical bar of lesbians to the side with the big girl image, and cover her with those images so we only see one tit, and it looks like she's kinda peeking out from behind it.

Then I'd DHTML those lower imaes with a 50% transparency/roolover.

Then I'd stretch it out a little so you can pump that text up more.

Also use a pixel text instead of making the regular font an image, that's why it gets just a little fuzzy on the edges. Pixel text does not.

Also check the gramar(sp?)
I'm not sure, but I think if you say "nets best kept secret" it's possessive and so it should look like "net's best..."

Also I don't know if "period" needs to be capatalized after a comma.

Also, don't call it lesbian content. When I hear content, I think it's something that I can see anywhere. Call it "the best lesbian sex.. or the best lesbian babes, or anything else... content just sounds weird to me.

Maybe incorporate the title in the text.

"Let these lesbians take over your world." or something like that.

But that's just me.. That's how I try to design.. best thing to do is try it out as is. If it works for you, cool go with it.

I'd definitely put in more eye contact shots, and lighten the image overload.

Nice,i like it

looks great

very nice, except i don't like the way the girl fades away on the right

What do you mean by pixel text?

a designers best kept secret.
http://www.wpdfd.com/tenacity.htm

http://www.wpdfd.com/wpdtypo3a.htm

look for free pixel fonts on flashkit or where ever you get your fonts.

you buy fonts? im sorry about your luck. but thanks for all the input.

thanks amp.

It sucks.

http://www.explicit-design.com/folio/sites/sample1/
http://www.explicit-design.com/folio...rs/sample2.jpg

Wow, man, you've the face to be negative about other people's design? hey Why, you are somehow "blurry", but other than that it's OK, make things brilliant and you're just on it, better that several so called "designers" here

your desktops are masterpieces

yea, i know its kind of blurry i need to see what i can do about that. and the text needs work, but im not very good at writting text, because i know its all fake.

its funny when even shiittier designers say it sux.

the rest of my portfolio can be found at http://www.dankmedia.com/portfolio.html

not good, but decent enough