Getting ready to launch my 4 tours...finally!
In the meantime, what do you think of my newest FPA ?
Any suggestions?
In the meantime, what do you think of my newest FPA ?
Any suggestions?
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Skin tones are a little yello IMHO.Comment
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Will you marry me
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too busy lookingComment
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looks good... i'd choose another main pic though, that's not a very flattering head-on face shot... makes your face look fat...
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Yes, and also I'd say not enough body around...Originally posted by RATBOY
Skin tones are a little yello IMHO.
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I agree with Greg, too much text on the right side. Perhaps you could spread the text of MeetNeriah over the entire right column and get rid of the features and friends section? I like the video content right into the FPA like this though, and the rest looks great.
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Thanks you guys...as far as my face looking fat...well maybe it is!
I will bring the gold tones down just a bit and try to minimize the text...thanks for all the advice
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1. There's too much of the same font. Two different fonts and two colors. Nothing stands out.
2. Everything is too square and rectangular. You should pick one flattering photo such as the large one to the left or even the one of you on your back and make it 3 diminsional.
3. Make pussycat lounge stand out more as this might be your main selling point when you try to get across how many other girls you feature on your site. If these chicks are on cams all the time, stress how much interaction they will get with you and your friends.
4. "Be a part of my sexy monthly newsletter" There's nothing sexy about a newsletter. Maybe let them know that you will send them previews of exclusive new content and maybe some reader emails replied to by you.
5. Skins too yellow. Looks like we might need to get our liver checked hehe...
6. The fact that you're a Playboy playmate AND a fredricks of hollywood model is huge. That's maybe where you should do some fancy text layering here and there with these brand names. The "Hi I'm Neriah... blah blah" isn't a powerful enough way to present it.Comment
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Looks niceComment
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Originally posted by RRRED
1. There's too much of the same font. Two different fonts and two colors. Nothing stands out.
2. Everything is too square and rectangular. You should pick one flattering photo such as the large one to the left or even the one of you on your back and make it 3 diminsional.
3. Make pussycat lounge stand out more as this might be your main selling point when you try to get across how many other girls you feature on your site. If these chicks are on cams all the time, stress how much interaction they will get with you and your friends.
4. "Be a part of my sexy monthly newsletter" There's nothing sexy about a newsletter. Maybe let them know that you will send them previews of exclusive new content and maybe some reader emails replied to by you.
5. Skins too yellow. Looks like we might need to get our liver checked hehe...
6. The fact that you're a Playboy playmate AND a fredricks of hollywood model is huge. That's maybe where you should do some fancy text layering here and there with these brand names. The "Hi I'm Neriah... blah blah" isn't a powerful enough way to present it.
this is why all our designers kill themselvesComment
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I don't have anything to add that hasn't already been said, but damn you've got a great rack!
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loading slow..
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I'm not much of a designer so I cant critque work that is better than mine..lol.
I have been trying to remember what issue I seen you in in Playboy and It finally dawned on me..You did a 50's type waitress set that I really loved .
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No, that was Barbara Moore....my set was hippie style and my centerfold was in front of a scooter:Originally posted by C_U_Next_Tuesday
I'm not much of a designer so I cant critque work that is better than mine..lol.
I have been trying to remember what issue I seen you in in Playboy and It finally dawned on me..You did a 50's type waitress set that I really loved .
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slow loading
tones are too bright
you have better pics than the ones your using as the main pic
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I'm still liking your second tour that I told you about yesterday.[email protected]
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Which one Bulldog? The tour or the ad?Originally posted by Bulldog-Johnnie
I'm still liking your second tour that I told you about yesterday.Comment
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i LOVE YOUmy bum itchesComment
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Well link it up baby! Whatcha waiting for?
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Looks great keep up the good work.RAM
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oops , my bad. you too look very similar. I don't have my old playboys to reference from..dammit, I should have never gave those back to the EX..Originally posted by Neriah Davis
No, that was Barbara Moore....my set was hippie style and my centerfold was in front of a scooter:
Do I get a spanking
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You are so beautiful!!!
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No YOU are!Originally posted by TaylorM
You are so beautiful!!!
I have never seen such gorgeous eyes in my lifetime
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niceObey the CowgodComment
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I like it. You look very hot
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Refresh it...I toned down the gold and added sample picsOriginally posted by webair
slow loading
tones are too bright
you have better pics than the ones your using as the main picComment
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you look great babes, I hope your site is rocking for you
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Looks nice, but its really slow loading. Probably take a minute and a half on a 56k modemComment
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The marketing text is boring, you have to make the surfer want to click before you get him to buy. You're a really pretty girl and surfers should adore you, give them a little impetus to adore you with their credit cards.
On another note, where'd you get those zip up panties you're wearing on the scooter? I think those ROCK!Comment
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first I think your Hot
and second I kinda like the FPA it's not the same ole simple FPA kinda looks like a tour page of some sortIn November, you can vote for America's next president or its first dictator.Comment
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Too many images; slow loading.
Ignore the suck ups.
have it fixed.
maybe combin some of those small images in the row into sets of 2 or 3. Possibly use a higher compression level on all the images.
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I think it has a good npsi ratio so it should do well
loaded ok for meComment
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the site looks goodComment
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Is it possible to replace that big pic in your FPA? Your hair looks a little funny in that one. Beautiful pic but not sexy.Originally posted by Neriah Davis
Getting ready to launch my 4 tours...finally!
In the meantime, what do you think of my newest FPA ?
Any suggestions?Last edited by Roger; 01-14-2004, 08:53 PM.Comment
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Good designComment
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you might want to create a no nudity one for teaser sites (non nude)
i find you sell more if you tease and upsell the nudity on your site.
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kinda blury and busyComment
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it looks like a throwback to your old design - would work best if the FPA had the look and feel of your paysite tour.I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!Comment
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the main pic makes you look older than you are. Fairly big and heavy for an FPA too depends what you want out of it i guess. it's basically a tour page. you could almost just pop the site itself and be one click closer to the money. just an untested initial thought.. it's a still a good looking fpa.Comment
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Is this one better for the main pic? I am not sure if maybe it should be more of a body shot? And this one's almost non-nude...I could just clone some hair over the nip...
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Thanks KimmyKim, I will work on the text...as far as the panties...those were from Trashy Lingerie baby! Awesome quality lingerie.Originally posted by Kimmykim
The marketing text is boring, you have to make the surfer want to click before you get him to buy. You're a really pretty girl and surfers should adore you, give them a little impetus to adore you with their credit cards.
On another note, where'd you get those zip up panties you're wearing on the scooter? I think those ROCK!
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Well I kinda like it. Good luck
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