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Old 12-09-2003, 07:43 PM  
tootie
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Join Date: Jun 2003
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Lots of spelling errors/typos that you need to fix. Here are some of them:

First one:

lenght - should be length

straming format - should be streaming

difrent speeds - should be different

shawed - should be shaved

instat access - should be instant

Second one:

4000 minutes of full lenght - again, should be length

shawed - again, should be shaved

get instat access - again, should be instant

prety-pussy.com - it's spelled pretty

May have missed some, I just scanned for a few once I saw the first couple. If you're going to sell stuff, you should be a little more careful. Occasional mistakes are okay, but if you're this careless people might not want to buy from you.

Overall, it's a pretty good design. Just need to fix those errors.
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