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  • Jakke PNG
    ex-TeenGodFather
    • Nov 2001
    • 20306

    #1

    Rate a logo

    Well, actually sofar, just rate my cartoon char that will be a part of a logo for a free gay site.
    Whaddya think? It's my first try at a male manga pic.
    I know the coloring is a bit odd at parts... gimme a honest opinion.


    I'm off to bed, I wanna see atleast 1 reply when I come back in 6 hours or so.
    ..and I'm off.
  • Loch
    Confirmed User
    • Feb 2002
    • 7674

    #2
    For your first i think its good

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    • Libertine
      sex dwarf
      • May 2002
      • 17860

      #3
      Looks good, dude, very good even.
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      • Fletch XXX
        GFY HALL OF FAME DAMMIT!!!
        • Jan 2002
        • 60840

        #4
        Nice.


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        • Cohen
          Confirmed User
          • Nov 2002
          • 1099

          #5
          very nice what program do you use fro drawing?
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          • Daymare
            Confirmed User
            • Feb 2002
            • 2674

            #6
            Looks like a good start

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            • Jakke PNG
              ex-TeenGodFather
              • Nov 2001
              • 20306

              #7
              Originally posted by Cohen
              very nice what program do you use fro drawing?
              A pen, a scanner and photoshop.
              Thanks for the sweet replies everyone.
              ..and I'm off.

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              • TDF
                Triple OG nigga on GFY
                • Mar 2002
                • 27296

                #8
                am i the only idiot not seeing the drawing?
                Sig heil

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                • Loch
                  Confirmed User
                  • Feb 2002
                  • 7674

                  #9
                  Originally posted by toodamnfli
                  am i the only idiot not seeing the drawing?
                  YES

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                  • -=HUNGRYMAN=-
                    Confirmed User
                    • Jun 2001
                    • 4751

                    #10
                    Hey TGF ... that Rocks !!!

                    I can draw the FUKENGRUVEN stick man quite well ... but that is the extent of my personal toon talents ... that is why I have 2 very talented artists on staff ...

                    Now if constructive criticism is what you are after, I would say overall it is a very good attempt ... the body is proportionate, which is where so many people fuck up ... All I would fix is make the hands a little more believeable, and maybe give him a slight nose job ...

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                    • Jakke PNG
                      ex-TeenGodFather
                      • Nov 2001
                      • 20306

                      #11
                      Originally posted by -=HUNGRYMAN=-
                      All I would fix is make the hands a little more believeable, and maybe give him a slight nose job ...
                      You have NO idea how many erasers I wasted on those hands so far, I do agree they suck ass. A nose job may be implemented too before I make it an actual logo
                      ..and I'm off.

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                      • Gutterboy
                        So Fucking Banned
                        • Jul 2002
                        • 4751

                        #12
                        I think its very good overall.

                        The upper body is a bit amorphous & doughy tho, give that boy some muscle definition!

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                        • Jakke PNG
                          ex-TeenGodFather
                          • Nov 2001
                          • 20306

                          #13
                          Originally posted by Gutterboy
                          I think its very good overall.

                          The upper body is a bit amorphous & doughy tho, give that boy some muscle definition!
                          What can I say... he's a twink
                          ..and I'm off.

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                          • archer
                            Confirmed User
                            • Jul 2002
                            • 1721

                            #14
                            Originally posted by Gutterboy
                            I think its very good overall.

                            The upper body is a bit amorphous & doughy tho, give that boy some muscle definition!
                            exactly what i would say gutterboy

                            and teengodfather.... twinks don't mean no muscle... trust me, i know
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                            • Jak
                              So Fucking Banned
                              • Apr 2002
                              • 1143

                              #15
                              Am I the only one getting a red X?


                              Jak

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                              • Mutt
                                Too lazy to set a custom title
                                • Sep 2002
                                • 34431

                                #16
                                hehehehe............. not bad TeenGodfather

                                BUT please look at your figure's left hand, notice anything odd?
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                                • -=HUNGRYMAN=-
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Jun 2001
                                  • 4751

                                  #17
                                  Originally posted by TeenGodFather


                                  You have NO idea how many erasers I wasted on those hands so far, I do agree they suck ass. A nose job may be implemented too before I make it an actual logo
                                  That's why I stick to STICK MEN brother !!!

                                  I've been trying to get a job as the design guy at VOLKSWAGEN for years now !!!!

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                                  • Mutt
                                    Too lazy to set a custom title
                                    • Sep 2002
                                    • 34431

                                    #18
                                    i wanted to be a cartoonist when i was in college, i submitted to every fucking men's magazine, Playboy, Penthouse, Hustler......never got anything accepted, i may have been too demented even for Larry Flynt. I got some trade magazines to buy some but they pay like 40 dollars, some even less so i gave that up.

                                    BUT the cartoonists greatest tool is a mirror, you should have a mirror when u draw, for facial expressions, hand gestures, etc
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                                    • Mutt
                                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                                      • Sep 2002
                                      • 34431

                                      #19
                                      i know man, hands always drove me nuts that's why i was looking at yours. The left hand - the thumb is on the wrong side! he's a mutant!

                                      take a figure drawing class, or just buy a good figure drawing book, there are lots of them.
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                                      • Mutt
                                        Too lazy to set a custom title
                                        • Sep 2002
                                        • 34431

                                        #20
                                        the left hand of the manga twink i mean HIS left hand, to the right for the viewer.
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                                        • p1mpdogg
                                          Too lazy to set a custom title
                                          • Nov 2002
                                          • 16714

                                          #21
                                          Originally posted by TeenGodFather
                                          Well, actually sofar, just rate my cartoon char that will be a part of a logo for a free gay site.
                                          Whaddya think? It's my first try at a male manga pic.
                                          I know the coloring is a bit odd at parts... gimme a honest opinion.


                                          I'm off to bed, I wanna see atleast 1 reply when I come back in 6 hours or so.
                                          Since when do humans have thier thumb on the left hand on the outside?!?!?!
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                                          • Triple 6
                                            Confirmed User
                                            • Feb 2002
                                            • 5394

                                            #22
                                            Hands are one of the hardest things to draw. Look at todays video and pc games - great work with characters, but most of them have some fugly hands.
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                                            • .:Frog:.
                                              Confirmed User
                                              • Jul 2002
                                              • 2123

                                              #23
                                              Looks good. Just fix his left hand.
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                                              • Jakke PNG
                                                ex-TeenGodFather
                                                • Nov 2001
                                                • 20306

                                                #24
                                                Ahahaha..
                                                Holy shit. That's funny.
                                                How didn't I notice something like that myself?! Well...
                                                ..and I'm off.

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                                                • -=HUNGRYMAN=-
                                                  Confirmed User
                                                  • Jun 2001
                                                  • 4751

                                                  #25
                                                  Originally posted by p1mpdogg


                                                  Since when do humans have thier thumb on the left hand on the outside?!?!?!
                                                  No no no !!! It is very obvious what happened here ...

                                                  The poor guy used his left hand to apply some penis growth cream, and now his fingers are all big and fat ... that is actually his pinky finger !!

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                                                  • wouncie
                                                    Confirmed User
                                                    • Apr 2002
                                                    • 1005

                                                    #26
                                                    Originally posted by p1mpdogg


                                                    Since when do humans have thier thumb on the left hand on the outside?!?!?!

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                                                    • DrewKole
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Jul 2001
                                                      • 5193

                                                      #27
                                                      Its coo I likes it

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                                                      • SetTheWorldonFire
                                                        Confirmed User
                                                        • Feb 2002
                                                        • 7444

                                                        #28
                                                        pretty good!

                                                        what's he supposed to be holding?
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                                                        • -=HUNGRYMAN=-
                                                          Confirmed User
                                                          • Jun 2001
                                                          • 4751

                                                          #29
                                                          Originally posted by SetTheWorldonFire
                                                          pretty good!

                                                          what's he supposed to be holding?
                                                          A tube of PENIS GROWTH CREAM

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                                                          • moresexmovies
                                                            Registered User
                                                            • Dec 2002
                                                            • 73

                                                            #30
                                                            Looks good man,..
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