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Originally Posted by Pink24
Just my 2 
smelled of decades old oak
smelled of decades of old oak
but when she shifted her weight, impatiently sitting on the hard, smooth bench, she sensed her own pheromones contaminating the sacred space - Nonsense
The heat of the room was causing her skin to moisten but that was imperceptible in relation to the musky scent being generated by the blasphemy of her lustful thoughts.
She had known Father O'Malley since ages
She had known Father O'Malley for ages
Honestly I didn't like it either. |
as already posted, personally, I´d exchange the she´s and he´s to named, so Mary had known, or Mary knew bla bla bla for so long...
& smelled of decades, smelt of decades or the smell of decades old oak.
Most definitely, this writing is not the highest level of English lit