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  • phillipribix
    Registered User
    • Apr 2009
    • 16
    #1

    Serious Newb, Serious girl

    Hey guys and gals, Im new here at GFY. I have surfed the board for quite some time and finally decided to get off my fat ass and set up a site. i have an exclusive model, Were setting up a site. already been approoved through ccbill and have themembers section up and ready to go. Currently only one gallery up but we will be expanding rapidly..

    Not allowed to post URLS until ive made 30 posts or more (im sure this will get me in trouble) double u double u double u dot darlingamy dot com

    Im looking for constructive critisizm, advice, links to my page, and a big bag of cash (ive been looking for the big bag of cash for a long time now, it seems to elude me) here are my strengths:

    an exclusive model
    Enough knowledge of the web to be dangerous

    my weaknesses:

    everything else

    im basically looking for a freind who can help me not get screwed, 9 or help me get screwed depending on your point of view)

    any help is greatly appreciated.
    www.darlingamy.com

    Exclusive Model

    ICQ 565-007-001
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    • phillipribix
      Registered User
      • Apr 2009
      • 16
      #2
      edit to add sig

      edited for sig
      www.darlingamy.com

      Exclusive Model

      ICQ 565-007-001

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        • SilentSound
          Confirmed User
          • Mar 2009
          • 287
          #3
          Hello, welcome!

          A couple of friendly tips to help get you started, just what I noticed on your site...

          First, sort out your page code-wise properly: it doesn't validate, and even misses the <body> tag - get that done ASAP. This will not get you good rankings, semantically the page is incorrect.

          Second, try to experiment a little more with the color and your top design: black, white, grey, pink (all around, i mean literally, even with the opening pic of your model). I would definately sort out some more appealing and maybe even more intensive design. But this depends on the overall style of the page. Get a good design - it's very important.

          Other board members will give you ideas on promoting, etc - I'll leave it up to them. Hit me up on ICQ though if you have any questions, I'm really glad to help, as I myself have recieved alot from the community.

          ...and last but not least: good luck !

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            • Manowar
              jellyfish  
              • Dec 2003
              • 71528
              #4
              Welcome to GFY, having a look at the site now, will post some tips

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                • Lushbucks
                  Confirmed User
                  • Nov 2008
                  • 313
                  #5
                  Welcome! Good info from SilentSound. You may also want to add http:// to your href= links.

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                    • phillipribix
                      Registered User
                      • Apr 2009
                      • 16
                      #6
                      I designed this page over the week last week needed something up no matter what this is what i came up with. i need to hire a pro to really set up the page and a real back end. but alas im poor. i will fix the body tags, but overall it does work for now. currently my biggest thing is TRAFFIC!! lol and MEMBERS!!
                      www.darlingamy.com

                      Exclusive Model

                      ICQ 565-007-001

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                        • SilentSound
                          Confirmed User
                          • Mar 2009
                          • 287
                          #7
                          Traffic you will earn from a solidly built page and marketing...

                          Search traffic + ref. traffic. But for search traffic to work, you absolutely must have a page readable by search engines. Don't overdo it (welcome to the world of SEO...), but make it correct.

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                            • phillipribix
                              Registered User
                              • Apr 2009
                              • 16
                              #8
                              working on it now, i guess that include the members sections as well huh
                              www.darlingamy.com

                              Exclusive Model

                              ICQ 565-007-001

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                                • SilentSound
                                  Confirmed User
                                  • Mar 2009
                                  • 287
                                  #9
                                  Well - it isn't indexed by search engines (except.. okay let's not overwhelm you with the technical details), so from an SEO point of view, no, BUT:

                                  it will not render correctly in all browsers, etc, etc, and missing a <body> tag... well that doesn't send too good signals if ya ask me

                                  hit me up later on ICQ if you need help

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                                    • SilentSound
                                      Confirmed User
                                      • Mar 2009
                                      • 287
                                      #10
                                      ...and dude, two </head> tags

                                      (edit

                                      ...and <a href="www.darlingamy.com"> will just point a browser to http://www.darlingamy.com/www.darlingamy.com which sucks actually: put that http:// in there as Camm said
                                      Last edited by SilentSound; 04-20-2009, 10:53 AM.

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                                        • phillipribix
                                          Registered User
                                          • Apr 2009
                                          • 16
                                          #11
                                          lol an hour into the forum and im getting a tounge lashing. beside done look at me body look at hers lol
                                          www.darlingamy.com

                                          Exclusive Model

                                          ICQ 565-007-001

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                                            • phillipribix
                                              Registered User
                                              • Apr 2009
                                              • 16
                                              #12
                                              ok fixed front page, is this better?
                                              www.darlingamy.com

                                              Exclusive Model

                                              ICQ 565-007-001

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                                                • SilentSound
                                                  Confirmed User
                                                  • Mar 2009
                                                  • 287
                                                  #13
                                                  You still have the </head> issue...

                                                  "Line 50, Column 7: end tag for element "head" which is not open"

                                                  http://validator.w3.org

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                                                    • SilentSound
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • Mar 2009
                                                      • 287
                                                      #14
                                                      Originally posted by phillipribix
                                                      lol an hour into the forum and im getting a tounge lashing. beside done look at me body look at hers lol
                                                      ...constructive critisism, not trying to be a know-it-all

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                                                        • phillipribix
                                                          Registered User
                                                          • Apr 2009
                                                          • 16
                                                          #15
                                                          SUCCESS!! 100% xhtml validation using the tool thank you for pointing that out to me, please double check jsut to make sure
                                                          Last edited by phillipribix; 04-20-2009, 12:05 PM. Reason: tiepos
                                                          www.darlingamy.com

                                                          Exclusive Model

                                                          ICQ 565-007-001

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                                                            • SilentSound
                                                              Confirmed User
                                                              • Mar 2009
                                                              • 287
                                                              #16
                                                              Good work mate! now it's optimize, optimize, and ... oh yeah, i didn't mention optimize did i?

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                                                                • phillipribix
                                                                  Registered User
                                                                  • Apr 2009
                                                                  • 16
                                                                  #17
                                                                  Thanks so much for the help, sorry if the tounge lashing post sounded mean, it was meant to be funny, what would you reccommend to drive traffic. should i just break down and pay for it?
                                                                  www.darlingamy.com

                                                                  Exclusive Model

                                                                  ICQ 565-007-001

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                                                                    • SilentSound
                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                      • Mar 2009
                                                                      • 287
                                                                      #18
                                                                      it's cool

                                                                      No way dude, don't buy it yet - work to get your page up to tops in terms of quality, build some backlinks (watch for quality!!!) and wait for some PR. When you've got some of that (maybe 1-2 months, don't get discouraged) observe your keywords and search terms very very closely - I think this is the time to get an SEO expert to redo your site, 'cause this is the time you are starting to see vital stats regarding your visitors.

                                                                      Be patient - think in the long run: you've got an exclusive model, a site for her, you just need to get your marketing right.

                                                                      good luck bro

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                                                                        • peeperpimp
                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                          • Aug 2006
                                                                          • 5105
                                                                          #19
                                                                          Originally posted by phillipribix
                                                                          Thanks so much for the help, sorry if the tounge lashing post sounded mean, it was meant to be funny, what would you reccommend to drive traffic. should i just break down and pay for it?
                                                                          NO dont buy traffic, bought traffic is generally shit, (most of the time) feeder traffic for tradeing...

                                                                          Hit me up icq (if you want help)
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                                                                            • bmchunu
                                                                              Confirmed User
                                                                              • May 2005
                                                                              • 320
                                                                              #20
                                                                              maybe put up a blog .. something public where your model will put up a weekly update at the worst.
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                                                                                • phillipribix
                                                                                  Registered User
                                                                                  • Apr 2009
                                                                                  • 16
                                                                                  #21
                                                                                  blog

                                                                                  yeah thats coming soon im trying to build links atm.
                                                                                  www.darlingamy.com

                                                                                  Exclusive Model

                                                                                  ICQ 565-007-001

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                                                                                    • LoveSandra
                                                                                      So Fucking Banned
                                                                                      • Aug 2008
                                                                                      • 10551
                                                                                      #22
                                                                                      Hi and welcome aboard

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                                                                                        • etriplex
                                                                                          Confirmed User
                                                                                          • Feb 2009
                                                                                          • 101
                                                                                          #23
                                                                                          Welcome to GFY

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                                                                                            • Elixir
                                                                                              CHECK MY SIG-AMAZING SITE
                                                                                              • May 2006
                                                                                              • 12870
                                                                                              #24
                                                                                              WElcome to GFY and good luck !
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                                                                                              ICQ 210874419

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                                                                                                • GothBuXXX
                                                                                                  Registered User
                                                                                                  • Apr 2009
                                                                                                  • 54
                                                                                                  #25
                                                                                                  Hey good luck

                                                                                                  Hit me up if you have any questions with anything.

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                                                                                                    • pornguy
                                                                                                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                      • Mar 2003
                                                                                                      • 62910
                                                                                                      #26
                                                                                                      1. Align the text to the center on the bottom of the page
                                                                                                      2. Tell me something about the site. you tour says NOTHING on the first page and you already lost 50%+ of your traffic.
                                                                                                      3. Dont need that many photos on the first page of the girl
                                                                                                      4. Your Updates link is password protected.
                                                                                                      5. you Dairy is password protected
                                                                                                      6. Your shop link is a 404.
                                                                                                      7. Live chat is password protected
                                                                                                      8. Friends is password protected.

                                                                                                      If they need to be password protected then they DONT need to be on the index page. Except for the MEMBERS button.

                                                                                                      text is confusing as hell and tells me NOTHING about what I will get inside.
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                                                                                                        • pornguy
                                                                                                          Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                          • Mar 2003
                                                                                                          • 62910
                                                                                                          #27
                                                                                                          Hope that helps some.. I am always available on ICQ if you want some more feed back.

                                                                                                          PornGuy skype me pornguy_epic

                                                                                                          AmateurDough The Hottes Shemales online!
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                                                                                                            • phillipribix
                                                                                                              Registered User
                                                                                                              • Apr 2009
                                                                                                              • 16
                                                                                                              #28
                                                                                                              still working on some of the areas, text is aligned
                                                                                                              www.darlingamy.com

                                                                                                              Exclusive Model

                                                                                                              ICQ 565-007-001

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                                                                                                                • Chosen
                                                                                                                  VIPPay.com | AdultWebSponsors.com
                                                                                                                  • Aug 2001
                                                                                                                  • 63151
                                                                                                                  #29
                                                                                                                  Hello & welcome to GFY

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                                                                                                                    • SilentSound
                                                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                                                      • Mar 2009
                                                                                                                      • 287
                                                                                                                      #30
                                                                                                                      Hello - some things I noticed again

                                                                                                                      - why are you using the simpleviewer flash object on the front page? it can be done in XHTML with a bit of javascript spice, and be WAY better for a crawler. Flash still causes their tummies to groan and you don't want that
                                                                                                                      - the shop link is incorrect, it's pointing to http://www.darlingamy.coms/tore.darlingamy.com - it should be http://store.darlingamy.com ?
                                                                                                                      - put the analytics code just before </body>, this is mainly from the user experience perspective

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                                                                                                                        • phillipribix
                                                                                                                          Registered User
                                                                                                                          • Apr 2009
                                                                                                                          • 16
                                                                                                                          #31
                                                                                                                          hey silent, hit me up on icq
                                                                                                                          www.darlingamy.com

                                                                                                                          Exclusive Model

                                                                                                                          ICQ 565-007-001

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                                                                                                                            • Fortress
                                                                                                                              Registered User
                                                                                                                              • Nov 2008
                                                                                                                              • 66
                                                                                                                              #32
                                                                                                                              hi and welcome, you will get a lot of great advice here.

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                                                                                                                                • AdultKing
                                                                                                                                  Raise Your Weapon
                                                                                                                                  • Jun 2003
                                                                                                                                  • 15601
                                                                                                                                  #33
                                                                                                                                  Make sure you keep an eye on your site stats and learn how people traverse their way through your site. You can find roadblocks and fix them if you learn to do this. Also make sure you regularly test your site in IE, Firefox and Safari. Validate your html and ensure your css works across as many browsers as you can manage.

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                                                                                                                                    • SilentSound
                                                                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                      • Mar 2009
                                                                                                                                      • 287
                                                                                                                                      #34
                                                                                                                                      that's right, the guy from down under said it: test, test, and test, and ensure cross-browser correctness

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                                                                                                                                        • michael.kickass
                                                                                                                                          Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                                                          • Mar 2009
                                                                                                                                          • 11039
                                                                                                                                          #35
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                                                                                                                                            • Exo_Seb
                                                                                                                                              Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                              • Mar 2007
                                                                                                                                              • 261
                                                                                                                                              #36
                                                                                                                                              Hey, welcome to GFY. I like the design of your paysite. It looks like made by amateur and maybe this will work good for your ratios.

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                                                                                                                                                • TMM_Vlad
                                                                                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                  • May 2007
                                                                                                                                                  • 1220
                                                                                                                                                  #37
                                                                                                                                                  Welcome aboard Whenever you are ready to set-up an affiliate program please let me know.

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                                                                                                                                                    • nexusweb
                                                                                                                                                      Registered User
                                                                                                                                                      • Apr 2009
                                                                                                                                                      • 8
                                                                                                                                                      #38
                                                                                                                                                      Looking good so far, I know you're already working on it, but I definitely think that you should get a better header graphic first and foremost. It can go a long way even if everything else on the site remained exactly the same. Plus, it's far cheaper/easier than doing a full tilt redesign by a pro before you're moving memberships.

                                                                                                                                                      Let me know if I can help and BEST OF LUCK!

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                                                                                                                                                        • phillipribix
                                                                                                                                                          Registered User
                                                                                                                                                          • Apr 2009
                                                                                                                                                          • 16
                                                                                                                                                          #39
                                                                                                                                                          Yeah i dont really know what im doing here. my bounce rate is through the roof, and i havent sold one thing yet. i really need some help .
                                                                                                                                                          www.darlingamy.com

                                                                                                                                                          Exclusive Model

                                                                                                                                                          ICQ 565-007-001

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                                                                                                                                                            • brassmonkey
                                                                                                                                                              Pay It Forward
                                                                                                                                                              • Sep 2005
                                                                                                                                                              • 77390
                                                                                                                                                              #40
                                                                                                                                                              welcome ill hit you up later
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                                                                                                                                                                • Iron Fist
                                                                                                                                                                  Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                                                                                                                  • Dec 2006
                                                                                                                                                                  • 23400
                                                                                                                                                                  #41
                                                                                                                                                                  Originally posted by pornguy
                                                                                                                                                                  1. Align the text to the center on the bottom of the page
                                                                                                                                                                  2. Tell me something about the site. you tour says NOTHING on the first page and you already lost 50%+ of your traffic.
                                                                                                                                                                  3. Dont need that many photos on the first page of the girl
                                                                                                                                                                  4. Your Updates link is password protected.
                                                                                                                                                                  5. you Dairy is password protected
                                                                                                                                                                  6. Your shop link is a 404.
                                                                                                                                                                  7. Live chat is password protected
                                                                                                                                                                  8. Friends is password protected.

                                                                                                                                                                  If they need to be password protected then they DONT need to be on the index page. Except for the MEMBERS button.

                                                                                                                                                                  text is confusing as hell and tells me NOTHING about what I will get inside.
                                                                                                                                                                  I came in here to say exactly that..

                                                                                                                                                                  As a surfer, the very first thing I clicked on was "Updates" expecting to see some thumbnail pictures of your recently updated galleries and sets, but when the password box popped up to log in, I closed down the browser immediately.

                                                                                                                                                                  Let's just say that your welcome page needs to work on SELLING YOU. By me clicking, shows i'm INTERESTED but NOT YET CONVINCED. Through clicking on links, you need to get me from INTERESTED to MEMBER... linking everything to a password protected members area does not accomplish that. Good luck, I'm sure you'll be revamping and working on that.
                                                                                                                                                                  i like waffles

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                                                                                                                                                                    • stonehammer
                                                                                                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                                      • Feb 2008
                                                                                                                                                                      • 1430
                                                                                                                                                                      #42
                                                                                                                                                                      congrats on making it to a actual paysite...still lots of work ahead !!!!

                                                                                                                                                                      i got put-off too by the "updates", in fact i closed your site after clicking on updates and getting a password prompt
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                                                                                                                                                                        • phillipribix
                                                                                                                                                                          Registered User
                                                                                                                                                                          • Apr 2009
                                                                                                                                                                          • 16
                                                                                                                                                                          #43
                                                                                                                                                                          good feedback on the Updates part of the site. Currently we are working on more content, so the updates are a little, well non-existent at the moment. fortunately you are clicking on the updates button so that is a start. it gives me a great place to start.
                                                                                                                                                                          www.darlingamy.com

                                                                                                                                                                          Exclusive Model

                                                                                                                                                                          ICQ 565-007-001

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                                                                                                                                                                            • swordfih
                                                                                                                                                                              Registered User
                                                                                                                                                                              • Mar 2005
                                                                                                                                                                              • 70
                                                                                                                                                                              #44
                                                                                                                                                                              Busy on your first day huh? Welcome and goodluck!
                                                                                                                                                                              lamp?

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                                                                                                                                                                                • viencarl
                                                                                                                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                                                  • May 2007
                                                                                                                                                                                  • 4234
                                                                                                                                                                                  #45
                                                                                                                                                                                  welcome to the board

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                                                                                                                                                                                    • killfranky
                                                                                                                                                                                      Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                                                      • Aug 2007
                                                                                                                                                                                      • 137
                                                                                                                                                                                      #46
                                                                                                                                                                                      I heard the designer bell ring ... check out my sig
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                                                                                                                                                                                        • rayadp05
                                                                                                                                                                                          TRUEAMATEURMODELS.COM
                                                                                                                                                                                          • Nov 2005
                                                                                                                                                                                          • 4175
                                                                                                                                                                                          #47
                                                                                                                                                                                          Welcome to the board and good luck to you.

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                                                                                                                                                                                            • u-Bob
                                                                                                                                                                                              there's no $$$ in porn
                                                                                                                                                                                              • Jul 2005
                                                                                                                                                                                              • 33063
                                                                                                                                                                                              #48
                                                                                                                                                                                              welcome

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                                                                                                                                                                                                • MrCain
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                                                                                                                                  • Jun 2006
                                                                                                                                                                                                  • 3332
                                                                                                                                                                                                  #49
                                                                                                                                                                                                  hi, welcome...
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Sigmund

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                                                                                                                                                                                                    • Freaky_Akula
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                                                                                                                                                                                                      • Oct 2005
                                                                                                                                                                                                      • 3670
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                                                                                                                                                                                                      Welcome.

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