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  • JayAllan
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    • Jan 2008
    • 1148
    #1

    New Tour Design << HD GLAMOUR GIRLS >> What do you think...

    I am thinking about developing this site. What do you think about the first page design?

    http://www.hdglamourgirls.com

    And here is one of my pics for the surfers.



    Let me know what you think
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    • mikesinner
      Confirmed User
      • Nov 2005
      • 5646
      #2
      Looks pretty good

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        • JD
          Too lazy to set a custom title
          • Sep 2003
          • 22651
          #3
          not a fan honestly. Looks like something out of the 90's... and what's with the one big image for the tour? Should definitely be sliced

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            • JayAllan
              So Fucking Banned
              • Jan 2008
              • 1148
              #4
              I started it last year and I kinda left it. I am thinking of getting back on it though.

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                • JayAllan
                  So Fucking Banned
                  • Jan 2008
                  • 1148
                  #5
                  Originally posted by JD
                  not a fan honestly. Looks like something out of the 90's... and what's with the one big image for the tour? Should definitely be sliced
                  JD

                  Thanks for the comment! I suck at html

                  And maybe I am stuck in the 90s? That's why I ask.

                  HOWEVER I think almost all the adult websites I look at totally suck design wise.

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                    • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                      best designer on GFY
                      • Mar 2003
                      • 30307
                      #6
                      Why dont ya hit me up Jay
                      I would love to make a tour for you or improve on that one.

                      I'll give ya a good deal!

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                        • JayAllan
                          So Fucking Banned
                          • Jan 2008
                          • 1148
                          #7
                          Originally posted by AlienQ
                          Why dont ya hit me up Jay
                          I would love to make a tour for you or improve on that one.

                          I'll give ya a good deal!
                          The LEGENDARY AlienQ !

                          I like your work man. I will definitely do a major overhaul of any site design that I do. I just want to get them up and making money first. Magazine sales are way down and I am not making the coin that I used to. So I want to get in with a simple design, and let my images and video speak for themselves to start with.

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                            • AlienQ - BANNED FOR LIFE
                              best designer on GFY
                              • Mar 2003
                              • 30307
                              #8
                              Awright well I can help ya with that to and give ya some tips if ya want any
                              Just throwing it out to ya I got mad Respect for yer work!

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                                • Deej
                                  I make pixels work
                                  • Jun 2005
                                  • 24386
                                  #9
                                  yea, totally... if youre rocking the hd glamour niche then you need a more schnazzy design

                                  some cool examples

                                  http://www.jessecapelli.com
                                  http://www.glamourmodelsgonebad.com

                                  I'm not saying yours cant pull the sales... but id suggest it as a better fit for your niche

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                                    • pornguy
                                      Too lazy to set a custom title
                                      • Mar 2003
                                      • 62910
                                      #10
                                      Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.
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                                        • tranza
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                                          • Jun 2003
                                          • 57559
                                          #11
                                          Looks very nice...you should try it!
                                          I'm just a newbie.

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                                            • JayAllan
                                              So Fucking Banned
                                              • Jan 2008
                                              • 1148
                                              #12
                                              Originally posted by Deej
                                              yea, totally... if youre rocking the hd glamour niche then you need a more schnazzy design

                                              some cool examples

                                              http://www.jessecapelli.com
                                              http://www.glamourmodelsgonebad.com

                                              I'm not saying yours cant pull the sales... but id suggest it as a better fit for your niche
                                              Thanks Deej. Those sites are "too porny" for me. They look good, but my style is way more unique. My content stands out as different (good or bad) so I want my website to do the same.

                                              Originally posted by pornguy
                                              Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.

                                              There is definitely something to be said about it looking different. I want it to not look at all like any of the other sites out there.

                                              Originally posted by tranza
                                              Looks very nice...you should try it!
                                              Right on man thanks

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                                                • Deej
                                                  I make pixels work
                                                  • Jun 2005
                                                  • 24386
                                                  #13
                                                  Well Ive always liked your work... you know what youre doing with the lens

                                                  Try it out as is... if you feel you want a different approach... just make an alternate tour or site... keep all sources open

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                                                    • alexchechs
                                                      Confirmed User
                                                      • May 2008
                                                      • 3474
                                                      #14
                                                      It does seem a little dated with the "cyber font" you are using. I think it needs to be updated a bit and i think there might be just a little too much "empty" space
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                                                        • spideriux
                                                          Registered User
                                                          • Feb 2005
                                                          • 17227
                                                          #15
                                                          looks really good for me
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                                                            • JayAllan
                                                              So Fucking Banned
                                                              • Jan 2008
                                                              • 1148
                                                              #16
                                                              Originally posted by alexchechs
                                                              It does seem a little dated with the "cyber font" you are using. I think it needs to be updated a bit and i think there might be just a little too much "empty" space
                                                              Yeah, I am pretty attached to that font . Maybe I am a little dated too. Is TRON still cool?

                                                              Thanks for the input. I have learned long ago that what I like is not usually (ever?) what the customer likes.

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                                                                • _Richard_
                                                                  Too lazy to set a custom title
                                                                  • Oct 2006
                                                                  • 30989
                                                                  #17
                                                                  first pic is a great one

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                                                                    • JamesK
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                                                                      • Jun 2002
                                                                      • 16731
                                                                      #18
                                                                      Looks old-skool.
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                                                                        • DVTimes
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                                                                          #19
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                                                                            • JamesK
                                                                              hi
                                                                              • Jun 2002
                                                                              • 16731
                                                                              #20
                                                                              Originally posted by JayAllan
                                                                              Thanks Deej. Those sites are "too porny" for me. They look good, but my style is way more unique. My content stands out as different (good or bad) so I want my website to do the same.
                                                                              You can always hire a designer and tell him to make it different. Most designers have portfolios full of sites looking like that because that's what their clients want.

                                                                              Your content looks great, wish I could say the same about that design
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                                                                                • Khulan
                                                                                  Confirmed User
                                                                                  • Sep 2008
                                                                                  • 890
                                                                                  #21
                                                                                  Looks fucking hot!
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                                                                                    • Verbal
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                                                                                      • Dec 2001
                                                                                      • 3420
                                                                                      #22
                                                                                      Hi JayAllen,

                                                                                      Here's my 2 cents

                                                                                      Try to lay off the numerous types of fonts on the same page. I wouldn't go with more than 3 types of font. Also, just because you CAN use the text styles, doesn't mean you have to. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but an inner shadow along with a drop shadow and a hint of bevel just is a bit overkill imho and takes away from what the text is saying.

                                                                                      I can appreciate simple and it's a good start, but with all due respect, your content deserves better ... it (the content) and the sales pitch get lost in the inconsistencies of the design.

                                                                                      Good luck man!

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                                                                                        • Elli
                                                                                          Reach for those stars!
                                                                                          • Apr 2003
                                                                                          • 17991
                                                                                          #23
                                                                                          I actually like the use of white space.
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                                                                                            • JayAllan
                                                                                              So Fucking Banned
                                                                                              • Jan 2008
                                                                                              • 1148
                                                                                              #24
                                                                                              Originally posted by Verbal
                                                                                              Hi JayAllan,

                                                                                              Here's my 2 cents

                                                                                              Try to lay off the numerous types of fonts on the same page. I wouldn't go with more than 3 types of font. Also, just because you CAN use the text styles, doesn't mean you have to. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but an inner shadow along with a drop shadow and a hint of bevel just is a bit overkill imho and takes away from what the text is saying.

                                                                                              I can appreciate simple and it's a good start, but with all due respect, your content deserves better ... it (the content) and the sales pitch get lost in the inconsistencies of the design.

                                                                                              Good luck man!
                                                                                              Thank you for the very informative criticism. I have heard that more than 3 fonts is bad in design. I tend to overbuild things. I think I will simplify it for sure.

                                                                                              Originally posted by Elli
                                                                                              I actually like the use of white space.
                                                                                              I do too and will maintain that
                                                                                              Thank You.
                                                                                              Last edited by JayAllan; 02-04-2009, 06:17 PM. Reason: SP

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                                                                                                • devine
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                                                                                                  • Jul 2006
                                                                                                  • 620
                                                                                                  #25
                                                                                                  Don't take this the wrong way, but it just looks like you put a Pinto engine on a Ferrari. Your content is amazing, but the tour transmit a message like if you didn't care much about it. Not saying you don't care, just the feel it gives. When you say HD you expect HD, not bad quality. You expect crisp, clear images instead of blurred stuff. I understand you're looking for a simple look, just don't confuse simple with ugly, which is a common mistake in adult biz. And btw, not a single link works.

                                                                                                  Again, don't take it the bad way, I'm saying this in a constructive way.

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                                                                                                    • digifan
                                                                                                      The Profiler
                                                                                                      • Oct 2002
                                                                                                      • 14618
                                                                                                      #26
                                                                                                      Originally posted by pornguy
                                                                                                      Honestly, I would leave it alone and see how it does. It for sure does not look like all the other sites out there.
                                                                                                      .. and it can be a plus.
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                                                                                                        • mikesinner
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                                                                                                          • Nov 2005
                                                                                                          • 5646
                                                                                                          #27
                                                                                                          So how many fhg's do you guys have together?

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                                                                                                            • JayAllan
                                                                                                              So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                              • Jan 2008
                                                                                                              • 1148
                                                                                                              #28
                                                                                                              Originally posted by mikesinner
                                                                                                              So how many fhg's do you guys have together?
                                                                                                              None Mike! This is only day 3 for this project. The site is not built yet. Just working on the tour design
                                                                                                              and scanning and retouching my sets.

                                                                                                              Once I have the basic site together we will put together some kick ass marketing materials.

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                                                                                                                • tony299
                                                                                                                  lurker
                                                                                                                  • Aug 2002
                                                                                                                  • 57021
                                                                                                                  #29
                                                                                                                  i like it, would have a little longer tour but i like it

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                                                                                                                    • bobby666
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                                                                                                                      • Nov 2005
                                                                                                                      • 21765
                                                                                                                      #30
                                                                                                                      my eyes really like what they see

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                                                                                                                        • MrDeiz
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                                                                                                                          • May 2008
                                                                                                                          • 9802
                                                                                                                          #31
                                                                                                                          awesome tour
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                                                                                                                            • ExLust
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                                                                                                                              • Aug 2008
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                                                                                                                              #32
                                                                                                                              Very hot pics.

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                                                                                                                                • nAtuRaLbEautY
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                                                                                                                                  • May 2006
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                                                                                                                                  #33
                                                                                                                                  Looks cool for me. Give it a try and let's see the results.
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                                                                                                                                    • Chicks Delivery
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                                                                                                                                      • Oct 2008
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                                                                                                                                      #34
                                                                                                                                      Seams very nice! Beautiful PIC!
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                                                                                                                                        • DutchTeenCash
                                                                                                                                          I like Dutch Girls
                                                                                                                                          • Feb 2003
                                                                                                                                          • 21684
                                                                                                                                          #35
                                                                                                                                          horrible

                                                                                                                                          everything that can be wrong is wrong, no seo text weird spelling small pics way way too small splash page

                                                                                                                                          spend some $ for a good design that does your pics justice

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                                                                                                                                            • candyflip
                                                                                                                                              Carpe Visio
                                                                                                                                              • Jul 2002
                                                                                                                                              • 43075
                                                                                                                                              #36
                                                                                                                                              Do yourself a favor and spend a few dollars letting a real designer handle the job.

                                                                                                                                              Just "getting something up" doesn't work.

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                                                                                                                                                • $tandaman
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                                                                                                                                                  • Jun 2001
                                                                                                                                                  • 3530
                                                                                                                                                  #37
                                                                                                                                                  http://www.hdbeauties.com/main.html Jay check out this, i'd think it's more suitable

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                                                                                                                                                    • JayAllan
                                                                                                                                                      So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                                                                      • Jan 2008
                                                                                                                                                      • 1148
                                                                                                                                                      #38
                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by bobby666
                                                                                                                                                      my eyes really like what they see
                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by daizzzy
                                                                                                                                                      awesome tour
                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by ExLust
                                                                                                                                                      Very hot pics.
                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by nAtuRaLbEautY
                                                                                                                                                      Looks cool for me. Give it a try and let's see the results.
                                                                                                                                                      get more sales.
                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by Chicks Delivery
                                                                                                                                                      Seams very nice! Beautiful PIC!
                                                                                                                                                      Thanks a lot guys. It is just the beginning but I am glad to see people respond positively

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                                                                                                                                                        • JayAllan
                                                                                                                                                          So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                                                                          • Jan 2008
                                                                                                                                                          • 1148
                                                                                                                                                          #39
                                                                                                                                                          Originally posted by DutchTeenCash
                                                                                                                                                          horrible

                                                                                                                                                          everything that can be wrong is wrong, no seo text weird spelling small pics way way too small splash page

                                                                                                                                                          spend some $ for a good design that does your pics justice
                                                                                                                                                          Thanks DutchTeenCash. I have not gotten into the seo, hell I have not even cut up the images. I will have to look at the spelling. Not sure what you mean by too small a splash page? Should it scroll more?

                                                                                                                                                          Originally posted by candyflip
                                                                                                                                                          Do yourself a favor and spend a few dollars letting a real designer handle the job.

                                                                                                                                                          Just "getting something up" doesn't work.
                                                                                                                                                          Margins are much slimmer now so I need to have a money maker before I can put $$ into a designer. Eventually I would love to have it redesigned by a pro.

                                                                                                                                                          Originally posted by $tandaman
                                                                                                                                                          http://www.hdbeauties.com/main.html Jay check out this, i'd think it's more suitable

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                                                                                                                                                          That's very interesting. I don't love the design, but it is definitely more professional than mine by a long shot. I will check it out further. Thanks

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                                                                                                                                                            • Art Room
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                                                                                                                                                              • Nov 2008
                                                                                                                                                              • 51
                                                                                                                                                              #40
                                                                                                                                                              The design doesnt really match the concept you are going for, an example would be the fonts used. Maybe some more fluid fonts and add some color to glam it up some. Grey and white doesnt really pop.

                                                                                                                                                              Just my two cents
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                                                                                                                                                                • HouseHead
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                                                                                                                                                                  • Aug 2003
                                                                                                                                                                  • 5539
                                                                                                                                                                  #41
                                                                                                                                                                  possibly a little to WHITE
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                                                                                                                                                                    • JayAllan
                                                                                                                                                                      So Fucking Banned
                                                                                                                                                                      • Jan 2008
                                                                                                                                                                      • 1148
                                                                                                                                                                      #42
                                                                                                                                                                      Originally posted by Art Room
                                                                                                                                                                      The design doesnt really match the concept you are going for, an example would be the fonts used. Maybe some more fluid fonts and add some color to glam it up some. Grey and white doesnt really pop.

                                                                                                                                                                      Just my two cents

                                                                                                                                                                      Yes, I think I will go with a more "elegant" font and use less typefaces overall.

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