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Firstly, great work. Why isn't more porn shot decently? I find it much more interesting.
I'm not sure what kind of input you're looking for but I do have a suggestion. If you were going to use that first clip as a trailer of sorts; the elevator scene drags on a little long in my opinion. I think you can definitely skip the shot of the floors going up from 2 to 5. What if when she leans against the elevator wall, the next cut is right to the one of her feet walking out of the elevator?
Also I love the shot when she presses the button to call the elevator. I almost you could cut there too, just because the way she pauses on the button.
I don't know why I am analyzing such a small clip that isn't even porn.
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