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The purpose of the site isn't clearly stated. I don't want to read a novel to figure out what your site is all about. There is almost nothing to click on on the first page. Just some nav links to unclear destinations, then a "join" link. So off the bat, you want me to join something unclear with no samples or examples. The price is also high. What makes your site stand out to warrant the higher than typical price? Whatever that is should be the focal point of the entire site. Why would someone join this site over Bang Bros, or Brazzers, or Fling or AFF... You have to set yourself apart and be very clear what makes you different.
The very first thing I read is that I'm too important to waste my time in the video store. Do you know that your site is a "video store" in some sense? So you're telling me to go away in a way. Also, video stores are nearly non-existent, so that verbiage is a bit out dated.
All of that text is great, but it's killing the site in it's current layout. The benefits / perks of the site further confuse as they start talking about discounts for cigars and other random stuff. Is this a porn site or a discount club? If it's both, that is kind of a strange combination.
Your target audience becomes infinitely small once you start focusing the purpose of the site to people that want the undisclosed 10,000 videos you have and cigar discounts.
You really need to refine what it is that you are selling and keep it simple. You should hire someone to consult with your brand, image, identity and iron out a clear goal and experience that keeps the path to cash in mind. Right now, I have no idea what I would be purchasing if I was crazy enough to pull out my card for this site.
Anyhow, that's my initial thoughts. Hopefully some or all of it is helpful.
Define and find your customers BEFORE you build a product.
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