Top right. You can't see the text clear enough in Top Left. Which some of you guys are forgetting, is important.
Red on red. Bad.
White on red. Clean.
I don't like the circle ... it could be cool, but the texture on it is too crainy. Not high quality enough. It looks pasted on. Doesn't flow with the 3d feel of the actual circle. Doing some work on that would be a good idea.
Overall tho ... I like the feel of it. The whole red, black and white thing is right up my alley Good stuff so far!
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Top right. You can't see the text clear enough in Top Left. Which some of you guys are forgetting, is important.
Red on red. Bad.
White on red. Clean.
I don't like the circle ... it could be cool, but the texture on it is too crainy. Not high quality enough. It looks pasted on. Doesn't flow with the 3d feel of the actual circle. Doing some work on that would be a good idea.
Overall tho ... I like the feel of it. The whole red, black and white thing is right up my alley Good stuff so far!
I agree, but ideally a color for the text should be used that is not counter to the message of "dark"!
first thing I thought of was the "Classic" coke bottle cap
...bottom rights the best
...the white ring around the others take away from the copy
... or change the white to a lighter shade of red
...
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top left is great! i think that's choice of the majority. go for it mate.
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I think the dots over the i's in Wikkid would look sweet as mini horns
out of all of em I'd pick bottom right myself but it does feel like that one's still missing something..
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Bottom right is the first one I was drawn to. It seems to be clean and easy on the eyes.
I would try putting a white shadow effect behind the red lettering to see if it enhances the look. If not white then maybe a light gray or silver shadow effect might give it a little more appeal.
The lettering and overall effect has the CocaCola feel to it like someone said previously.
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Top right. You can't see the text clear enough in Top Left. Which some of you guys are forgetting, is important.
Red on red. Bad.
White on red. Clean.
I don't like the circle ... it could be cool, but the texture on it is too crainy. Not high quality enough. It looks pasted on. Doesn't flow with the 3d feel of the actual circle. Doing some work on that would be a good idea.
Overall tho ... I like the feel of it. The whole red, black and white thing is right up my alley Good stuff so far!
exactly my thoguht... i like the first one best since its not all white text like ther second one...
personally i would keep the first one and just offset the red in the text a little... maybe it contrast off of the ring behind... the different colored text is much nicer than the second solid color text...
For a logo, less is more. There is too much going on here.
I think the font, size relation and layout of the text is good. Colors... I really like Wicked Things in white. Did you try that with Dark Art Studios and the dots of the i's in red?
The shiny circle is no good. It's distracting from the text. If you have to use it, did you try making the plain bottom right circle smaller so that the text sits on top of it? Then maybe cut the line width in half. And I'm not so sure about that texture.
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